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Real1ty
Member since Oct 22nd 2007
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Mon Oct-29-07 08:02 PM

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"The creation of heroes, loss of friends"


          

Beautiful flowers give rise to immaculate buds,
Just as immaculate buds give rise to beautiful flowers.

Rise sweetheart-
Feel the sunlight warm the tips of your petals,
But do not forget your roots-
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.
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The water drips down to the very heart of it all,
But it is not whole.
Forget the water and you forget the process-
Forget the process and you forget the past-
Forget the past and you forget-

Just as the flower rises,
The man will rise.

Just as the flower falls,
The man will fall.

It is not the duration of this phase that matters,
But rather-
Its impact.

- Real1ty
God bless the dead

  

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RE: The creation of heroes, loss of friends
Oct 30th 2007
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RE: The creation of heroes, loss of friends
Oct 30th 2007
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RE: The creation of heroes, loss of friends
Nov 10th 2007
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RE: The creation of heroes, loss of friends
Nov 12th 2007
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i really liked this
Nov 16th 2007
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invisible ink
Member since Apr 07th 2003
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Tue Oct-30-07 08:08 AM

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1. "RE: The creation of heroes, loss of friends"
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Just as the flower rises,
The man will rise.

Just as the flower falls,
The man will fall.


i like the buddha zen feeling of these words....lovely...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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Real1ty
Member since Oct 22nd 2007
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Tue Oct-30-07 10:45 AM

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Thank you for the kind words. I was trying for a natural zen like feeling so I'm glad it came across that way.

  

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ms mimi diva
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Sat Nov-10-07 03:23 AM

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Who slept on this one...pure poetic genuis, understated, yet creeping up on the mind with a strong impact... and lovely....I love it...

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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BannedWidth
Member since Jun 11th 2007
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Mon Nov-12-07 12:11 AM

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wow....that was simply beautiful

  

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ClizVA
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Mon Nov-12-07 08:34 AM

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It is not the duration of this phase that matters,
But rather-
Its impact.


I love that line....
and this piece..

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RIP Sean Taylor 21 * My favorite Skin

"These simpletons they mentionin is synonym for feminine."

WVU

  

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mindful
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Fri Nov-16-07 08:58 PM

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the peacefulness to it as well as the simplicity is truly a breath of fresh air. my favorite lines are:

But it is not whole.
Forget the water and you forget the process-
Forget the process and you forget the past-
Forget the past and you forget-

Just as the flower rises,
The man will rise.

Just as the flower falls,
The man will fall.


*nods* good work...


p.s. i too, am from the S.A.V. born & raised... moved quite a while ago, but still go home from time to time of course, most of my fam's still there.

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http://msmind.wordpress.com
http://www.clutchmagazine.com

*peaceful*

  

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