Its been a minute since we last spoke,
a long minute since I felt the heaving
Feeling of my heart jumping from my chest to my throat.

Thought I was close,
To getting over this
Ridiculous grace note
And figured you were close too
Judging from how hard you've
Been pushing me away
since the day
I woke up and decided to leave you.

But then may 16th came,
and through a foggy haze of laughter
my phone rang, projecting your name.

I hesitated, wondering if I should avoid you.
Yet despite my bad feelings, I answered,
Cause I still have the innate itching to spoil you.

I could sense by your tone,
That you were feeling more than alone.
Questioning my whereabouts and mood,
I played it cool
Knowing your tricks,
I kept my answers short
to decrease the chance of any rude comments.

for,
I'm still bleeding
still healing
still searching
still grieving
still growing

away from you.

feelin this so close
good feelin to write to

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

i like this

good luck with your relationship

(and i'm quite sure others do as well) all too well... best|most potent lines to me:

Yet despite my bad feelings, I answered,
Cause I still have the innate itching to spoil you.

I could sense by your tone,
That you were feeling more than alone.
Questioning my whereabouts and mood,
I played it cool
Knowing your tricks,
I kept my answers short
to decrease the chance of any rude comments.

for,
I'm still bleeding
still healing
still searching
still grieving
still growing

away from you.

the ending is a very solid one. not one I expected. concise and tight, yet gives the reader a bit of insight. digable *nods*

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thats my F.A.M. RIGHT THERE
cell is dead hit up jesse or the house

pace

u are my inspiration
when i go limp
you are my spine
when my bus breaks down
you are my feet

remember that when ur missing those who seem to have left u behind
im just ur best friends
ur lovers must miss u

so, i'm definitely living this right now.

**snaps**
way to capture the emotion of the situation. i can really relate to where you are coming from and the imagery of the phone conversation is crystal clear.


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