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meccau
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Mon Apr-09-07 06:48 PM

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"Can U See....A Rhyme I wrote....critique please"


          



...Putting cream in ya bank,
if you come broke, you leave rich, sugar in ya tank?
no, for the girls who are stripping at night
go teach it in a day, paid double the price
...my hustlers money and rap intact
you can sling bars like a version of crack
never relax vision wider than Imax
under fitted cap's mind untapped

As i hover over cities like a flight attendent
like a bad politician i forget to mention
we in a war, never listening to Take 6
:spread love: but the germ in the dirt like worm
we never learn and neglecting any tutor
in a future all rulers in computers
so troop don't be a dog-be a pedigree
don't get piece of a pie-get the recipe

Put a bottle in the air shake it when a cork is out
fizzing to the T pour when the ladies out
but you never had it yet, gambling at roulette
you a young kid pointing at rides you wanna get
...Mom yelling your name out of Apartments
Saying "Dinner's ready, Spaghetti and salads"
your a young prince facing a door to ya palace
if knowledge is a key, let me unlock it.......


peace.

  

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