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UncleClimax
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Fri Apr-06-07 01:14 PM

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"Willow Weep For Me"


  

          

this jazz is a mostly forgotten alive
winter when to forget is unknown to die
gentle wings suggest from now
an overmuch stretch that has ease how
some through clouds do shine and drift
noise can drag but rhythms dance to lilt
in simple terms or with a might I may
begin today, betray before, and venture more
to lose is to love a not assured
mountain rock where no falls astray
become like one--a broken day)
since clever time unends bright with dawn

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different
Apr 06th 2007
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RE: Willow Weep For Me
Apr 07th 2007
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thanx niggros
Apr 10th 2007
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mindful
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Fri Apr-06-07 09:16 PM

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1. "different"
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and fresh...

favorite lines:

or with a might I may
begin today, betray before, and venture more
to lose is to love a not assured
mountain rock where no falls astray
become like one--a broken day)
since clever time unends bright with dawn

*nods*

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Ezzsential
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Sat Apr-07-07 05:05 AM

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2. "RE: Willow Weep For Me"
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feelin this dude! 'specially the last lines.. yeah it was different
nice haikuish feelin at the end



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UncleClimax
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3. "thanx niggros"
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