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LegacyEarth
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Tue Apr-03-07 05:13 PM

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"Mic Check (for fake emcees turned poets)"


  

          

I could what you do, EASY!
Believe me, frontin' niggaz
gives me heebie-jeebies - Lauryn Hill - Ready or Not

For the fake emcees who think they can do what we do.....right...
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Mic check 1,2.....mic check 1,2
It's laughable the amount of defected MC's
That take up residence at open mic
Searching for the success that alluded
Them by 16 bars and beat dependency
It's become trendy to be MC/Poet
But most times it's just the fact
That their tracks collapsed
From underweight raps
That couldn't take the pounds
Of heavyweight rounds with real hip hop artists
While Def Jam reinventions remixed with hyped rhyme patterns
Might entertain Pavlovian appreciative audiences
This poetess most protests these upstarts
Cuz failed MC's do for this art what the introduction of RB hooks
Did to hip hop
It's the type of marriage that begs for divorce
Poets vs. wannabe MCs being taken to the court
Bitter bitchery over who is the better half
Resulting in the aftermath
Of exploited expressions
Custody battles over creativity
The art gets distorted
But I'm calling for order
I make the motion to appeal this conviction
It's senseless pitting written styles against the bullshit
Some of these rap act poets are spitting
Don't get me wrong spoken word is the root of hip hop
But where do we draw the line between real word smiths
& pissed off low level emcees
Passing themselves off as poets
I contort my mouth in disdain
To see pain plagiarized on stages
After some soul bled their life force unto pages
Dampened with the tears and sweat of their labor
I don't write and spit for simple entertainment value
My words make war and give birth to muses
That manifest messages of powers
I don't need a rapid fire cadence
To deliver dramatics with nonsense
This art is not about ego
Ergo I must insist that you sit your ass down
Instead of wasting your five minutes on the mic
& my five bucks at the door
I didn't come here for a Minstrel Show
I came to bare witness to a movement
To watch torch lights ignite
To gain some insight
To have my spirits lifted by the gifted
To sit with the misfits in a placed called our own
Slambos and faux emcees are not welcome in my home
There are no battles for belts or thrones here
Nothing is ruled by the mentality you abide by
There are no instrumentals for simpletons
Give me some complexity vs. your complacency
Serve me something from the recesses of your soul
Not verses that are arrested in their development
It's irrelevant your belief that you can rock the mic
When you have even failed at being the hype man
Rhymes still too soft to stimulate erection
Infantile styles that abort upon conception
Your perception is blinded to the fact
That bad raps CAN NOT be passed off as poems
An official mic check is taking affect
Check for conscious
Check for content
Check for clarity
Check for reality
Check....check...check
Mic checked!

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About me: Legacy Leonard, 27, Detroit writer, poet and activist. Lover of arts, lover of music, and lover of life.

I mean FTP, nigga : Free The Prisoners, Feed The Poor, Fuck The Police, Fight The Pigs, Fix The Projects and Fight The Muthaf*ckin Power

  

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RE: Mic Check (for fake emcees turned poets)
Apr 03rd 2007
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RE: Mic Check (for fake emcees turned poets)
Apr 03rd 2007
2
Well Say "That" Then ...
Apr 03rd 2007
3
i can see why youre mad
Apr 04th 2007
4
oh n i feel u
Apr 04th 2007
5
RE: Mic Check (for fake emcees turned poets)
Apr 04th 2007
6

pcldagun
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Tue Apr-03-07 06:09 PM

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1. "RE: Mic Check (for fake emcees turned poets)"
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This is the longest poem i ever read in my life. You must have got a lot of stuff you had to get off your chest. What can I say ,except speak your mind and censors stupidity.

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Apr-03-07 07:14 PM

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2. "RE: Mic Check (for fake emcees turned poets)"
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Welcome
Most of all welcome the sentiment I really don't think i can say just how much I can appreciate this yet there is something lurking behind me asking while this does set the record str8 does it do the same thing in essence? battle for battle sake i am no mcee rapper or battle form writer i often don't get it but there are times i do...anyway good to see another view

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Apr-03-07 09:28 PM

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3. "Well Say "That" Then ..."
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>I didn't come here for a Minstrel Show
>I came to bare witness to a movement
>To watch torch lights ignite
>To gain some insight
>To have my spirits lifted by the gifted
>To sit with the misfits in a placed called our own
>Slambos and faux emcees are not welcome in my home
>There are no battles for belts or thrones here
>Nothing is ruled by the mentality you abide by
>There are no instrumentals for simpletons
>Give me some complexity vs. your complacency
>Serve me something from the recesses of your soul
>Not verses that are arrested in their development
>It's irrelevant your belief that you can rock the mic
>When you have even failed at being the hype man
>Rhymes still too soft to stimulate erection
>Infantile styles that abort upon conception
>Your perception is blinded to the fact
>That bad raps CAN NOT be passed off as poems


I guess you told _ _ _ _ _, huh? --


Tight flow Ms. Lady -- And (((Welcome))) to the OKP circus ...





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Ezzsential
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Wed Apr-04-07 01:10 AM

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4. "i can see why youre mad"
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because freestyle has been flooded with alot of battles lately-but we're just bored.. well me, anyway
see- i joined this battlerap contest so im tryin to practice and i want someone to come at me with fiyah so i can be inspired

about your poem: it was moving- protest-esque-expressive at best
nice work and welcome



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
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Ezzsential
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5. "oh n i feel u"
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Wed Apr-04-07 01:14 AM by Ezzsential

  

          

hiphop does become distorted but that seperates the mainstream bs from the underground conscious thought provokin stuff

basically- hiphop is misrepresented-but thats a whole other chapter...
but i guess that's why their should be a distinction
hiphop-thought provoking rap-mainstream superficial
r & B- superficial/permiscuous soul(or neo soul)- indepth and expressive

spoken word-spoken word

shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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LegacyEarth
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Wed Apr-04-07 09:49 AM

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6. "RE: Mic Check (for fake emcees turned poets)"
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Thank you everyone and thanks for the welcome.

I mean FTP, nigga : Free The Prisoners, Feed The Poor, Fuck The Police, Fight The Pigs, Fix The Projects and Fight The Muthaf*ckin Power

  

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