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the_best_part
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Tue Apr-03-07 06:42 AM

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"april 2"


  

          

i think i have written something like this before
the same memory comes when i think about this

your memory survives in me
i am taken back to a day in spring
when i helped my mamma plant rooster cones
in the flower bed
and your voice sang out
thru the open windows
oh
mercy mercy me
sometimes in my mind
i go back to my girlhood
sit in daddy's lap
with red lamp light glowing
your sound filling up the room
troubled sound from a troubles soul
trouble man

i wanted nothing more than to be
a sanctified lady
cause that sort of lady moved you

its selfish to wish
you were still here
so i just listen to
your memory forever recorded
and pour out a little potion
happy born day
lets gettit on
rest in peace

  

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RE: april 2
Apr 03rd 2007
1
b/c marvin gaye was definitely one of the greatest
Apr 03rd 2007
2
^UP^
Apr 04th 2007
3
RE: ^UP^
Apr 04th 2007
4

southernboy_423
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Tue Apr-03-07 07:45 AM

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1. "RE: april 2"
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good to see u writing good work miss.

Peace


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mindful
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Tue Apr-03-07 08:22 AM

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2. "b/c marvin gaye was definitely one of the greatest"
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oh
mercy mercy me
sometimes in my mind
i go back to my girlhood
sit in daddy's lap
with red lamp light glowing
your sound filling up the room
troubled sound from a troubles soul
trouble man

i wanted nothing more than to be
a sanctified lady
cause that sort of lady moved you


and you commemorated him well above. *nods* beautiful.

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Apr-04-07 10:36 PM

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3. "^UP^"
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^Up^

^up^


Your words -- and dedication to Marvin -- are like a soothing balm ...


*Healing*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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ASIEM
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Wed Apr-04-07 11:18 PM

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the wonder is that you have to hold somethings sacred to really understand the depth like the sacred time the 70's hold's
dedicated to song this rises

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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