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AidenWaves
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Fri Mar-30-07 05:27 PM

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"school boy crush"


  

          

can we
escape sublime epiphonies
and run rampid
through thoughts of
here and now

not eternaties

can we move like the wind
soft and smooth
changing course
getting rough
and ridged

should we howl like wolves
at the full moon?
or spin webs of silk
the way aracnid do?
or even come to terms with our mortality
and find a way to breathe
more easily?

would you kiss me in the regions of black sand
and caress my pink rose
it's scent saturating what makes you a man
and if all of these things do come true
one day
would it be okay
to say
i love you


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Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
OH man, i love this piece, cotton candy sweet
Mar 30th 2007
1
RE: OH man, i love this piece, cotton candy sweet
Mar 31st 2007
2
sup man?
Mar 31st 2007
3
      RE: sup man?
Mar 31st 2007
4
so - significant other
Apr 01st 2007
9
      RE: so - significant other
Apr 06th 2007
10
Awwwwwww -- How Sweeeeet ...
Apr 01st 2007
5
RE: Awwwwwww -- How Sweeeeet ...
Apr 06th 2007
11
this is that
Apr 01st 2007
6
RE: this is that
Apr 06th 2007
12
hmm
Apr 01st 2007
7
RE: hmm
Apr 06th 2007
13
      RE: hmm
Apr 07th 2007
16
           RE: hmm
Apr 15th 2007
18
3rd stanza
Apr 01st 2007
8
RE: 3rd stanza
Apr 06th 2007
14
RE: school boy crush
Apr 06th 2007
15
RE: school boy crush
Apr 15th 2007
19
hey hermanitto
Apr 11th 2007
17
RE: hey hermanitto
Apr 15th 2007
20

Mrs_Mallory
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Fri Mar-30-07 05:35 PM

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1. "OH man, i love this piece, cotton candy sweet"
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makes me want to cuddle up to my S.O. :0(

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AidenWaves
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Sat Mar-31-07 04:05 AM

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2. "RE: OH man, i love this piece, cotton candy sweet"
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Yo, what's an S.O.???? thanks for the love, ma....it's much appreciated.

Ciao!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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empro
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Sat Mar-31-07 05:32 AM

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3. "sup man?"
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How & Where you been?

  

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AidenWaves
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Sat Mar-31-07 12:50 PM

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4. "RE: sup man?"
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been here and there...i've been good and bad...what's goin on with you kid? how's the Cali life treating you?

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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Mrs_Mallory
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9. "so - significant other"
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AidenWaves
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10. "RE: so - significant other"
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Duh...i should have known that...wish i had one...i just have a school boy crush...(cute guy at work)...LOL! thanks a gain for hte love ma!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Apr-01-07 12:41 AM

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5. "Awwwwwww -- How Sweeeeet ..."
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Itz been awhile since you've dropped candy on the board ...


*Yummmm*





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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AidenWaves
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11. "RE: Awwwwwww -- How Sweeeeet ..."
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yeah, you know the candy man likes to sprinkle cherry flavored rain sporatically...but i can't stay away for long.

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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Zin
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6. "this is that"
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gurl you stole my heart for the evening ...kiss my cheek move in you confused things ...

i liked the writing ....Z(EYE)

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Guess who's Back

  

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AidenWaves
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12. "RE: this is that"
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not too many cats dig my writing, that is once they find out i'm a man....and you prolly will rethink this whole piece now, but, ehh...que sera sera...


Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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Ezzsential
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7. "hmm"
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this was cute and brought back sentiments from childhood

first love innocent.. nice




shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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AidenWaves
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13. "RE: hmm"
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hi E...i've missed you... glad you liked it....not love, but, sumthin...you ever meet someone and they give you this feelin...not butterflies, but sumthin....that's this cat...anyway, i dye-gress...muah!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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Ezzsential
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16. "RE: hmm"
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lol yess ofcourse! good luck witthat.. hows it going anyway? havent seen u here in a while



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AidenWaves
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18. "RE: hmm"
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been working, trying to get to the next plain to do my bidding...how's everything w/ you?

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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mindful
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8. "3rd stanza"
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is where it's at for me. *nods* peace~

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AidenWaves
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14. "RE: 3rd stanza"
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ms. ful, you're gonna bring out hte inner queen in me that every sgl man in the world has...that was a hot one tho, huh? glad you liked it....oh, and when are we gonna meet. we live in the same damn city. muah!

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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15. "RE: school boy crush"
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this is just nice poetry...beautiful
i like the aracnid usage

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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AidenWaves
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19. "RE: school boy crush"
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Whuddup AYE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've missed you! thank you....muchos gracias, papo. but the jokes on me...yet again i fall victum to the "straight boy crush", so guess what new song i wrote...you guessed it. let me stop rambling. thanks again.

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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marijane
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17. "hey hermanitto"
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te amo

and I'm not ignoring your calls..i was on my excersion!

funny how you live at my house and THIS is the way we communicate

kisses

and I am SO proud of you. It takes courage!

did you take my painting to them?

good to see you back using your gift.

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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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AidenWaves
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20. "RE: hey hermanitto"
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Hey, bay-bay.... thank you, than you very much...they have it hanging over their bed... the love it...but he's straight....

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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