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PhotoSynthesis
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"I "Hear" U ..."


          

Fingers reach out to touch
Massage
Comfort
Acknowledge
I feel you – I HEAR you
I may not *know*
From personal experience
As you do ...
But I can empathize
More than just sympathize
FEEL --
Tiny tears trickle from embered eyes
Burning images of silenced cries
Smokey skies open up to swallow pain
Waiting for the restless rain
I "feel" you – I HEAR you
Screaming thru manevolent memories
In broken hues of black & blues
Rewind & play back childhood lullabies
SLEEP
Soothing sounds erase heavy~hearted sighs
:':WEEP:':
Spilled emotions leak thru suppressed thoughts
With nests caught in tangled tree limbs
Rock A' Bye My Baby
Leaves shrivel up & die from lack of love
Seeking retribution & healing from above
PRAYING
For fingers to reach out and touch
Massage
Comfort
Acknowledge
(((Rescue)))
RELEASE
Just *know*
When you’re feeling low
I feel you – I HEAR you

I CARE











A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
we see you...
Mar 26th 2007
1
RE: we see you...
Mar 28th 2007
9
good gracious honey!!!!
Mar 26th 2007
2
Word...
Mar 27th 2007
3
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Mar 27th 2007
4
what is JOY
Oct 28th 2009
28
awww
Mar 27th 2007
5
RE: This was touching...
Mar 27th 2007
6
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Mar 27th 2007
7
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Mar 28th 2007
11
      *Chuckles*
Mar 29th 2007
13
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Mar 27th 2007
8
I think we hear YOU
Mar 28th 2007
10
CoSign
May 30th 2007
16
Waiting for the restless rain
Mar 28th 2007
12
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Mar 30th 2007
14
cause someone else needs to know too...
May 29th 2007
15
I Shoulda Known ...
Jun 02nd 2007
19
RE: I "Hear" U ...
May 31st 2007
17
RE: This was truly Beautiful...
Jun 01st 2007
18
I thought I commented on this already...
Jun 08th 2007
20
WE & I too HEAR you
Jun 09th 2007
21
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Jun 09th 2007
22
Nice 2 C U 2 ...
Jun 26th 2007
23
*-up-*
Jul 17th 2007
24
i hear u
Jul 26th 2007
25
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Jul 28th 2007
26
RE: I "Hear" U ...
Oct 27th 2009
27
Damn!...
Oct 28th 2009
29

ASIEM
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1. "we see you..."
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somber thoughts
found letters to
reveal mental images
dancin still
tappin fingers
chat on line
looking for the
humble not sublime
easy it seems
to catch a phrase
words just fallin
down a page
slowly chance awakens
sleeping souls
rizing from beneath
lies once told
erase the madness stay alive
finding solutions
is how we strive
when the poems rhyme
too much we simply
wait cause someone
has been touched
we see you
hear you know u r there
it's inside
like, she said, that u will
notice that ...
we care


startin prom night off i send u flowers to let you know how sweet you are and just because without you green we would not see

b t w ur work does a body good

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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9. "RE: we see you..."
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>startin prom night off i send u flowers to let you know how sweet you are
>and just because without you green we would not see


I got your flowers kind sir -- *Thank U So Much* --


~Appreciate The Sentiment~


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And the fact that I carry a can a' green paint around with me at all times, has nutthin' to do with your seeing green ... So disregard the can! -- *heheh*






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Lincoln Hawk
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Mon Mar-26-07 11:04 PM

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2. "good gracious honey!!!!"
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you fill a page dont ya...i digs...always have...peace

"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

  

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empro
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3. "Word..."
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Nice to see you dope another thought provoking post

Keep it comin

  

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XadaboBangGud
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4. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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SOUND that laughing makes!

one

  

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overaboves
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28. "what is JOY"
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Ezzsential
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5. "awww"
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Tue Mar-27-07 02:04 PM by Ezzsential

  

          

"love is never wrong"
sing songs and carry on
hit the bongs and echo sighs
alongside stride
extrude confidence
even though life is like a box of chocolates
never know
just roll with the flow
that's all we get is
chance
& hope for significance





shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
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ak_reborn
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6. "RE: This was touching..."
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>Fingers reach out to touch
>Massage
>Comfort
>Acknowledge
>I feel you – I HEAR you
>I may not *know*
>From personal experience
>As you do ...
>But I can empathize
>More than just sympathize
>FEEL --

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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the_best_part
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7. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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you have a certain distinctive style. like, if i read something with no author listed i think i would know it was yours. its something in the language. its nice

  

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ASIEM
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11. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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so true you got that perfectly something about thte language is all photo

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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13. "*Chuckles*"
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>something about the language is all photo

You mean my "pig latin"? --



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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tonka truck
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8. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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always a jam


TE-TE
The End - To Everybody

  

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ThaAnthology
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10. "I think we hear YOU"
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Marvelous piece. The tone came across very well. Always a pleasure, yo.

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16. "CoSign"
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n/m

_________________________________________
"Too weird to live.... too rare to die..."

IG: KnowOne215 | PS+ ID: KnowOne215

  

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ms mimi diva
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12. "Waiting for the restless rain"
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That was clean...plain and simple

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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deepthought74
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14. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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This is beautiful...I got a response to this shortly angel

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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ASIEM
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15. "cause someone else needs to know too..."
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how much you are being heard
pssst listen

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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19. "I Shoulda Known ..."
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It was YOU! -- -- (((Diggin' ^UP^ the dead))) -- *LoL*

Thanx luv -- *'Preciate It*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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HueyNewton
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17. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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yeah ma I really do hear you cuz it's evident like ya wordz do care ~
heartfelt piece photo . . *smile*

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

  

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18. "RE: This was truly Beautiful..."
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i felt like a newborn cryin out to be touched and being soothed by a mother's hand, touch and healing voice...

truly beautiful...

MUSE

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Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
St. Juste

"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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Nowachaoticthing
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20. "I thought I commented on this already..."
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Empathy can be beautiful and painful in its own right.

So I guess I feel you feelin me? (Get yer minds out tha gutta! I was being earnest... not naughty!)

Anyways, me likey.

"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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Babynoon
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21. "WE & I too HEAR you"
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Beautiful....(1word)

  

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22. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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Sat Jun-09-07 08:11 AM by Focus23

  

          

ahhhh.
Like a breath of fresh air, Feel the warmth of the sun on my tongue.
Its good to come back and see that you are still kickin' it around here.
As always I love your stuff.

Steam-Powered Spit-Sessions Re-write the Bright-Lessons of Life each day with Nice-Blessin's...Word/Life/Write

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ToBeContinued;
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23. "Nice 2 C U 2 ..."
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Glad to see you're still alive & kickin' -- -- *STICK AROUND*

And you haven't written in your blog for almost 2 years!?!?!? -- *Shame On You*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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24. "*-up-*"
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n/m

...
..
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Speak and it shall manifest
Breathe and it shall live
Love and it shall triumph
Give and it shall never be
lost... ever... - MarcArthur
St. Juste

"not one voice unheard" -
VOICES NYC (Brooklyn, NY)

HALLELU YAHWEH! AMEN

  

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rukudzo
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25. "i hear u"
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yeah trully i do thru this piece real nice

peace

  

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deepthought74
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26. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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IM DIGGING YOUR FLOW GENIUS!!

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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ASIEM
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27. "RE: I "Hear" U ..."
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this had to come back to let someone know...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




www.myspace.com/asiem61

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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29. "Damn!..."
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Two years flies by fast, huh? --


*Photo Blows A Kiss*


Thanx 4 the UpPaGe ... *Good Memories*






A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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