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ThaAnthology
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"Life Write"


  

          

Life Write


When I was in my twenties, I used to write
I mean boy I used to—I used to write
Write like words would fall from my mind through lips
And onto paper like vocabulary waterfalls

Love was my arrow
Truth, my bow
Coffeehouses were my pedestal
I was a soulful street preacher baby
Speaking to masses
Draped in loose-fitting apparel
Locks and afros
Black fists
And finger snappin’

Man, when I was in my twenties…
I used to write
I’d pen the most creative ways to
Take panties off
Without ever touching skin
I was a bad man!

I used to relive fantasies of Malcolm marching for freedom
Within to confines of blue lines
On white pages
I was black ink

I’d write about God and ask Him
To show me what I needed to see
Asking Him why it was what it was and when will it ever be
Different

When I was in my twenties…

Yeah when I was in my twenties …
I was…naďve

I had no clue what love was and how much responsibility
Came with the cause of claiming another for yourself
And having the fortitude to keep
The love created by
Beautifully written sentences

I was a militant with no Army
No foot soldiers, no FBI watch list
No leather jackets, no medallions or other trinkets
Used to define the struggle

My struggle is bills and feeding my family
While still teaching God body lessons to a newborn
So he won’t be as blind
As dear old dad
Using type as my revolution
And words as my base

I had no claims on God or man for that matter
But I used to write…
And as blind as I was
I was good, and I think that was the problem.

But now I’m 34, and I don’t write as much…
But I live it a lot better than I used to
When I was in my twenties
And used to write
About
The very thing I’m living.



© Fahim Malik Nassar March 24th, 2007

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Life Write
Mar 24th 2007
1
Thanks yo!
Mar 26th 2007
2
my hands kept clapping on down because I could identify
Apr 02nd 2007
11
RE: Life Write
Mar 26th 2007
3
wow...
Mar 26th 2007
4
**ahem**
Mar 26th 2007
5
i can relate to this one
Mar 26th 2007
6
You're Still A "Bad" Man ...
Mar 26th 2007
7
RE: Life Write
Mar 26th 2007
8
^UP^
Mar 27th 2007
9
how the hell did i miss this one? GOODNESS.
Apr 02nd 2007
10
^UP^ 4 The "NEW" Mod ...
Apr 03rd 2007
12
RE: ^UP^ 4 The "NEW" Mod ...
Apr 04th 2007
13

ms mimi diva
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1. "RE: Life Write"
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I understand this so much. Sometimes when I am living, I take a break from writing, and come back to it as a way to reflect. I'm not quite out of my 20's yet, but this made me smile.

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Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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ThaAnthology
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2. "Thanks yo!"
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Someone here mentioned that she didn't write that much anymore and it caused me to ponder that. I don't quite write like I used to, but well, anyway...

thank you.

www.anthologyfmn.com

Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
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The Spook who sat by the Radio Poetry (av

  

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Mrs_Mallory
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Mon Apr-02-07 09:30 PM

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11. "my hands kept clapping on down because I could identify"
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so much of what he's talking about. Oh my oh my...

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the_best_part
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3. "RE: Life Write"
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this is so true of me too

  

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KnowOne
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4. "wow..."
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this piece is so on point yo. Really nice readin from ya again.
Peace

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southernboy_423
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Mon Mar-26-07 11:23 AM

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5. "**ahem**"
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this would make a dope interlude **walks off**


Peace


"everyone like spectacular pass me the ordinary, da peanut butter and jelly to da lobster and shrimp, the o' oh thats him, to the mobsters and pimps" - ME, dammit!

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Ezzsential
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6. "i can relate to this one"
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indeed.. nice reality peice



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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PhotoSynthesis
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7. "You're Still A "Bad" Man ..."
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At least, your words are still molesting the Board! --

Okay, okay, molesting may be a bit too strong -- Ummmmm -- Let's just say, you're still massaging the Board ... -- *Yeah That's It* --


*Felt the Flow*


~Fluid~


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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ASIEM
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Mon Mar-26-07 10:58 PM

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8. "RE: Life Write"
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keep livin keep writin cause in my forties the writin has really just begun and yeh a whole lotta livin in between...
nice piece

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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empro
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9. "^UP^"
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Gotta ^ this one for the 21 & over cats heh!

  

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Mrs_Mallory
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10. "how the hell did i miss this one? GOODNESS."
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I am just in awe, could you please pass me some of that butter of yours. Sheesh...

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PhotoSynthesis
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12. "^UP^ 4 The "NEW" Mod ..."
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I just wanted to see that "OK" by his name~ --


*Niiiiiice*




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Mrs_Mallory
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13. "RE: ^UP^ 4 The "NEW" Mod ..."
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*snap snap*

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