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marijane
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Thu Mar-15-07 07:39 AM

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"just like inspiration"


  

          

feels like I've inspired a revolt
a fuck you of sorts
in the tone that you wrote
a big middle finger
to the hate and unbelievers
i commend you freestyle
for setting yourselves free

this is not a poem though

So
We recognize that guise
of these guys is the lies
of their eyes
fooling them thinking
they've seen light

but we must press on
ice grill oppositon
and gangsta lean
on pressure

never forgeting we are binded by our words

but this is not a poem though

it's a movement



keep shining!

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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well...then...keep it movin
Mar 15th 2007
1
it's a movement... ha!
Mar 15th 2007
2
RE: just like inspiration
Mar 16th 2007
3
You Got To Move It Move It ...
Mar 17th 2007
4
you're crazy!
Mar 17th 2007
6
RE: just like inspiration
Mar 17th 2007
5
RE: just like inspiration
Mar 18th 2007
7
thats whats up
Mar 18th 2007
8

Lincoln Hawk
Member since Jul 14th 2005
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Thu Mar-15-07 08:02 AM

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1. "well...then...keep it movin"
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the movement that is

"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

  

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mindful
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Thu Mar-15-07 07:49 PM

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2. "it's a movement... ha!"
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for some reason...

these 3 lines

ice grill oppositon
and gangsta lean
on pressure

just jumped out at me... definitely the most potent... Peace~

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http://msmind.wordpress.com|this life
http://www.clutchmagazine.com|writing for more than food.

something like a chameleon.

  

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Travis Holden
Member since Feb 15th 2007
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Fri Mar-16-07 06:07 PM

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3. "RE: just like inspiration"
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We recognize that guise
of these guys is the lies
of their eyes
fooling them thinking
they've seen light

but we must press on
ice grill oppositon
and gangsta lean
on pressure

I really liked these two stanzas, but it aint a poem its a movement. Nice drop wicked flow

---
"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Sat Mar-17-07 01:04 AM

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4. "You Got To Move It Move It ..."
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>but this is not a poem though

>it's a movement


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A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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marijane
Member since Feb 26th 2004
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Sat Mar-17-07 11:16 PM

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6. "you're crazy!"
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and i love it!

_____________________________________
WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

  

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the_best_part
Member since Jan 13th 2005
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Sat Mar-17-07 08:12 AM

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5. "RE: just like inspiration"
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ha...there's no box to put you in. 'this isnt a poem' had double meaning to somebody(me) who always clicks your posts on here. its a movement, indeed.

  

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ASIEM
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Sun Mar-18-07 01:04 AM

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7. "RE: just like inspiration"
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ok i'm late but u got another fan
this poem ahhem scuse me "movement" delivers the mail

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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Ezzsential
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Sun Mar-18-07 08:27 PM

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8. "thats whats up"
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fav part:
>
>but we must press on
>ice grill oppositon
>and gangsta lean
>on pressure



- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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