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PG
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"worked to death - haiku"


  

          

a life rehearsal
looking the worse for it all
and then curtains fall

  

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worked to death - haiku II
Mar 15th 2007
1
i like the first better
Mar 15th 2007
2
      Co-sign /nm
Mar 28th 2007
11
RE: worked to death - haiku
Mar 16th 2007
3
Both -- Nice ...
Mar 17th 2007
4
worked to death - haiku II"I"
Mar 20th 2007
5
RE: you
Mar 20th 2007
6
those were hot but
Mar 22nd 2007
7
:P
Mar 26th 2007
8
na i was askin
Mar 27th 2007
10
RE: those were hot but
Mar 29th 2007
13
worked to death - haiku IV
Mar 26th 2007
9
worked to death - haiku V
Mar 29th 2007
12
worked to death - haiku VI
Apr 03rd 2007
14
RE: worked to death - haiku
Apr 03rd 2007
15
RE: worked to death - haiku
Apr 03rd 2007
16
worked to death - haiku VII
Apr 11th 2007
17
RE: worked to death - haiku VIII
Apr 11th 2007
18
worked to death - haiku IX
Apr 18th 2007
19
worked to death - haiku X
Apr 24th 2007
20
RE: worked to death - haiku
Apr 24th 2007
21
RE: worked to death - haiku
Apr 27th 2007
22
RE: worked to death - haiku
Apr 29th 2007
23
worked to death - haiku XI
Apr 30th 2007
24
RE: e-120
Apr 30th 2007
25
worked to death - haiku XII
Jan 03rd 2008
26

PG
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1. "worked to death - haiku II"
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grind another out
regardless of your own doubt
what life is about

  

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mindful
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2. "i like the first better"
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*nods*

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something like a chameleon.

  

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Nowachaoticthing
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11. "Co-sign /nm"
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"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession."
- Robert Frost

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http://inevitabletruth.blogspot.com/

  

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Travis Holden
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3. "RE: worked to death - haiku"
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Yeah agreed, I like the first one, rehearsal->curtains fall. nice piece people sleep on haikus but I liked this one peace

---
"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."

  

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4. "Both -- Nice ..."
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Looks like you could give Delrica a run for her money --

I wonder what a Haiku battle would look like ... -- *chuckles*









A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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PG
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5. "worked to death - haiku II"I""
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even just one day
to say to you what I would
the peace of goodbye

II"I" RIP

  

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freedomfighter
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6. "RE: you"
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what if what no love
beat found stratus fears touching new
on my nerves i'm with

  

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7. "those were hot but"
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i thought haikus had to have nature in them?



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


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PG
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8. ":P"
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ok I'm being contemporary if not disciplined.. I could stretch to say "life" and "day" are pieces of nature but I may as well say everything in existence is implicity natural...


  

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10. "na i was askin"
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nm



shouldn't say it all or it will be taken
stolen by the Devil
God's my only vacation


...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoulmusiq
www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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tonka truck
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13. "RE: those were hot but"
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love is natural
TE-TE
The End - To Everybody

  

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PG
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9. "worked to death - haiku IV"
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dripping impatience
give me the whole rush right now
cash in and kill me

  

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12. "worked to death - haiku V"
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degrees separate
my hands and the blood on them
a margin too slight

  

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14. "worked to death - haiku VI"
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in contemplation
exhausted motivation
seeks a paradigm

  

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15. "RE: worked to death - haiku"
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boh............!

thats so true
round these parts
us hearts call this scene
a monopoly game
a damn shame if you get wasted mang
seriously though check my name
its wildout back in the house once again
trilogy's still in progression
as the ages flow and the karma rolls
three by three where i see by me i know
where-ever i go whatever i be
this society has got no true spot for me
you play your part on the alloted slot on the board games
and do your time to survive this age
and no sage would condone the way the machines kill and revive us
its only the machine in this way that survives us
and thrives on us maliciously against the best of all our abilities
because we are ancient souls astral travels in progression
our presence on this Earth is made of complexed blessings
and lessons are learnt waking up amidst all this confusion
but i know in my heart that this is just the shadow of illusion
alluding as a shadow to the object of my mission
we are gods children this is just a transition
peace

  

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LegacyEarth
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16. "RE: worked to death - haiku"
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Nicely done. You must have a job similar to mine. WHEW

I mean FTP, nigga : Free The Prisoners, Feed The Poor, Fuck The Police, Fight The Pigs, Fix The Projects and Fight The Muthaf*ckin Power

  

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17. "worked to death - haiku VII"
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in which direction
should the spinning be focused
so ineffective

  

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18. "RE: worked to death - haiku VIII"
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would that I knew fate
to labour only in love
and not this disgust

  

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19. "worked to death - haiku IX"
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sixteen hours of shit
with all the first world guilt
but no running water

  

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20. "worked to death - haiku X"
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fuck you and your horse
I am not your prostitute
this is not worth it

  

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21. "RE: worked to death - haiku"
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got up this morning
left sleep for the day ahead
out the door i go..........

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
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cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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22. "RE: worked to death - haiku"
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what 2 do strang fruit
packs moon's crack pot critic stage no
voice they will see chilie


Freeworld Order
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23. "RE: worked to death - haiku"
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i like this...captures my monday mornings quite well.

the new sig-

"When you know that the life and spirit of others depend on your life and spirit, you have no right to be afraid - even when you are terribly afraid."

-Sembene Ousmane

  

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24. "worked to death - haiku XI"
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Day in and day out
Over and over again
Ripped the fuck off!

  

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25. "RE: e-120"
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shift paid baggy jeans
holds body water ladies yell
don't stop progress

  

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26. "worked to death - haiku XII"
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shoot me in the head
beat my body black and blue
I'm through with you

  

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