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C.R.I.S.I.S
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Mon Mar-12-07 07:53 PM

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"Life's a Bitch"
Mon Mar-12-07 08:00 PM by C.R.I.S.I.S

          

This aint the full version but, NIGGAS dont like to read,jk, but i cut some parts out to make it shorter.



She was a beauty queen on the scene
With blessed genes
She was blessed in jeans
Honestly the best I’ve seen
She tuned guys to fiends
She was a sight for seeing
Her body was godly
And her walk was mean
But oddly she was just a teen
Sixteen to be exact, infact
She had every guy dreaming of being part of her being
To merge with her like day and night into evening
But they didn’t know she kept the deepest of secrets
All the while, behind her smile her soul was steadily bleeding
How when she was sleeping
Her step father would creep in
And touch her in places she didn’t believe in
Then he would ease in
She would weep as he seeped in
Impregnated with hatred
So latent she couldn’t face it
Tell me how could she mend her broken heart
When it was cracked from the start
The last blow was from her mother
Who ripped it apart
All the pain and grieving weaving in and out of her mind
She felt confined in hell,
Intertwined in anguish as she languished
Her desire to vanquish
Anxious, she knew first hand what pain is
She tried to sustain it
Until it was too much, life was just too rough
So she grabbed a stainless
One shot to the head was painless
As she lay there dead on the bed
The note that she wrote read
Life’s a bitch then u die, aint it?

Racism is a C.R.I.S.I.S
Causing Rifts In Socially Ignorant Societies


T.H.I.N.K
True Habitual Intelligence Needs Knowledge
Knowledge is key, Think

  

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RE: Life's a Bitch
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PhotoSynthesis
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Mon Mar-12-07 10:28 PM

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1. "RE: Life's a Bitch"
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Mon Mar-12-07 10:32 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

Nice Lil' Flow~stream --


*Felt*


Edit: By the way C.R.I.S.I.S. -- Feel free to check other's flows on the board and RESPOND!

If you want NIGGAS to read and respond to "your" ish / at least have the courtesy to do the same, nahmean? --


~It Works Both Wayz~





A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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C.R.I.S.I.S
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Tue Mar-13-07 12:13 AM

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2. "RE: Life's a Bitch"
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Ok, May bad

Racism is a C.R.I.S.I.S
Causing Rifts In Socially Ignorant Societies


T.H.I.N.K
True Habitual Intelligence Needs Knowledge
Knowledge is key, Think

  

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kid abstract
Member since Aug 20th 2006
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Tue Mar-13-07 03:26 AM

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3. "RE: Life's a Bitch"
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I'll take you on for that, new jack,
my rime like that
ill style like combat mixed matial arts
and the old thunder stink like skunk farts
I am the real
sucka motha fuckas want a new deal
I cut wack dick like his saw
I'm Jacob, you Esau
techne rime on time like I'm old raw
stop lookin at beaches, they my people
emo style in tear gas, always insane
paint ya walls like my mane was Kurt Cobain

Now who the fuck are you?:

  

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kid abstract
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Tue Mar-13-07 03:57 AM

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arroyo my name is Michael, it's written in the bible
and that be the ill style, apsotles and disciples
tru s'coup time and magnificent ryme
likka M-16 from springfield armory
ill nuke nike coupe like oldsmobile
ill slinga style like victory real
naismith is see thru, my people the people
greata than less than never equal
ill spartan style, farm state American people
noa people rime hardcore shoryuken real
hadouken in ya area
I throw rime style: histyria
cuz them lady MC's when they see me
they ready to ovathrow they country
I'm old Y chrome, all zone is farming
and my man to man is ill charming
even wayne gretski can't test my goalie
ill north style like holy
and thor's hammer
reprezent cats who heard gone till november
and still don't stamma
still got the illest spit stamina
freal, Yherd?
sometimes I'm pretty sure my sign serpentarius

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Mar-13-07 09:19 AM

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5. "RE: Life's a Bitch"
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well written executed on on point phot said it post and reply you have an audience besides i'm an older "nigga" ah hem and if it read all of it like this did i would welcome the moment i took to inhale
so if in a C R I S I S you want emerging response don't assume nuthin n write

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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