As she spoke I could hear the quiver in her tone … The quiver of fear …. Most alpha males can smell the fear a scared female … And at this moment she reeked of fear…
He stood there watching as she ranted and raved on about This and that … About how no man had or would beat her …
And instead of making a scene in public he let her put on a show for Her new found fan base … He knew that by smacking her …he still wouldn’t win … She would still win because he acknowledged the fact And she would get the attention she craved … That she wasn’t getting at home …
Listening to the moans of how she had …been done wrong And how here new nukkas were the best nukkas doing it He laughed and rocked back in his chair And admired the show she put on For her new found fan club ….
always on the cutting edge watch out and don't step of that ledge because it will cost everything you've got no not those thongs no not that sad love song no not that wrong over price answer call me a dancer of jazz keys and stinging peoples reality african killer bee i c u on my shoe string trying to keep up so what you think i'm trip ping over you and the things you do maybe becaue i love you oh it's true this cyber space athem but you say i can't stand him but in a way i love him he make me smile
hahaha lol road call fuck all ya'll i'm be a dawg barking to i die
2. "RE: I call this ....Recognizing what a bitch wants" In response to Reply # 0
take alot of humility to be dat man damn take alot of sanity too
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
5. "Well, At Least U Recognize ..." In response to Reply # 0
But forreal tho, this flow had a story~tellin' steeze that kinda pulls the reader in for a closer look -- Yet you snapped the book shut with the last line.
>I'll kiss yo bitch ass in the mouth ...
The impact is there -- But the story seems UNFINISHED!
Never~The~Less -- It's nice to C U doing something different with your steelo -- *Multi~Faceted/Multi~Talented* Aren't ya? --
Carry On ...
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
yo, this shit right here nigga! this shit right here!
pardon my tongue but that there is something else.
peace
"everyone like spectacular pass me the ordinary, da peanut butter and jelly to da lobster and shrimp, the o' oh thats him, to the mobsters and pimps" - ME, dammit!
10. "RE: I call this ....Recognizing what a bitch wants" In response to Reply # 0
This was real solid, I liked the storytelling skills on display here and showed the intelligence to swallow the pride, lettin her put on the show. Lotta people can probably relate to this nice piece
--- "Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."
reek of fear my G reek cut ya nuts turn a fake bull to feeder steer ya here? raw Y R type puts Zin in yesteryear electrify electrocute I'm rocking with the true choir E state executor bring it I'm the wack rime refuter pulled up high like soccer socks on lady hip hop's thighs I'm s'hip s'hop and it's time for clowns to die tell you about s'pear when I'm drinking raw rye curved blade sharp on on side saw toothed on the other side with a hook to pull down wack ridaz bruce lee like the bride I'm takin fake ass niggaz to the real side blade cut through your guts and saw blade hack ya spine now you a lame ass dead man and I'm pissing on your rime
17. "why do these fake ass clowns" In response to Reply # 16
keep trying to make me come out ya'll want to see some real mcing so want you do ya'll must be still gone off the 10 post commmandments ....lol get this bull shit out of here read it good i refuse to give ya cumbs the attetion you need that goes for you and you and you and you and you tooo
you been checking my stats ...but it gonna take alil more than a bulls shit ass alias ....and rhyming words at the end of sentences ....not to mention cheap ass retorts like that to make me rhyme at you clown...
fake ass bitch nigga I bring the raw down, the war down, the lightnen down. You a slave in a plato's cave throwin raves, idols of the market, Rostov country squire throwin stones brak'n mirrors. Die Muthafucka.
I don't think taking shit to far against Zin is possible. Throw a riot ryme, you complacent ass convenience addict bitch on some wack dick. Wake people up if you want me to stop.
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