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savagehenry
Member since Feb 11th 2007
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Sun Mar-11-07 02:37 AM

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i burn holes in words
26 letters but one herd
workiin 'em out feel the burn
sunshine thru clear skies
feel heat feel me
believe my lies
i speak absolute truth
cold as dark sides
clever like fox
crazy as the same thing
toe an insane line
to make the agreed upon language sing
im all about white backgrounds
and black ink
spacin' out time eyes wide
but must blink
life monotonous
but brains like to think
livin in metropolis
always close to the brink
ready to deal with holes
but not tryin' to sink
leavin my kitchen's island
with a nudge and a wink

  

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RE: white background
Mar 11th 2007
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RE: white background
Mar 11th 2007
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RE: white background
Mar 20th 2007
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I could see this going somewhere...
Mar 20th 2007
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ASIEM
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Sun Mar-11-07 03:02 AM

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1. "RE: white background"
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now this can go on a little more and slam an end
i like this

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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savagehenry
Member since Feb 11th 2007
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Sun Mar-11-07 03:19 PM

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thanks, yea i never wrote this, just typed it, and i thought it came out all right.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Mar-20-07 08:26 AM

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Sounds like a great start & middle -- But it fell off at the end -- *Needs More Fiber* --

*Spit That Shit*

Lengthen It ...







A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Origin05
Member since Mar 24th 2005
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Tue Mar-20-07 11:19 AM

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run with the idea.. I like the form it begins to take near the end..

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