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C.R.I.S.I.S
Member since Mar 02nd 2007
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Fri Mar-02-07 09:16 PM

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"Allow me to introduce myself......."
Fri Mar-02-07 09:24 PM by C.R.I.S.I.S

          

Yo I just joined, but this is some old stuff i wrote like last year ago i might post something new soon. enjoy!


America
The country of bias bigots and belligerent critics/
Corrupt politicians causing catastrophic collisions/
Lookin down on its citizens/
Placed in properties of poverty/
And withhold provisions/
The country where prejudice is predominate/
Discrimination is not lost/
People would sell their soul to the devil/
If at the right cost/
Racism is driven/
By stereotypical visions/
Propaganda perverting the pure image of religions/
Organizations carry out missions of hate/
Our nations is trapped within the walls of discrimination/
But refuses to escape/
Politics is polluted by perverted politicians/
Democracy decapitated by demonistic decisions/
A realistic relation with other nations is fading/
While our leader watches the game/
Other countries grow in their hatred/
For America/
The home of the free/
The home of the brave/
The home of white supremacy/
The home of the slaves/
The home of the black panthers and the K.K.K. /
The place where freedom was born than taken away.


Racism is a C.R.I.S.I.S
Causing Rifts In Socially Ignorant Societies


T.H.I.N.K
True Habitual Intelligence Needs Knowledge
Knowledge is key, Think

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
RE: Allow me to introduce myself.......
Mar 03rd 2007
1
Hello ...
Mar 04th 2007
2
RE: Hello ...
Mar 04th 2007
3
      RE: Hello ...
Mar 04th 2007
4
           We all in this
Mar 04th 2007
5
                RE: We all in this
Mar 06th 2007
6
it is revealed (Mathew 11:25)
Mar 06th 2007
7
\head nod
Mar 07th 2007
8

lunaeco
Member since Dec 13th 2002
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Sat Mar-03-07 06:08 AM

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1. "RE: Allow me to introduce myself......."
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I like the plays on the abc's, plus the still steady realness of this piece, maintaining message throughout . . and also how it is thought out to a climax of long-chanted, well-known statements, wondering where that leaves us, in this day and age, with all the build-up from before.
Thanks for the intro, keep flowing and bless

~~~


my
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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Mar-04-07 03:19 PM

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2. "Hello ..."
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Sun Mar-04-07 03:21 PM by PhotoSynthesis

          

(((Welcome Aboard)))

I like this: Casing Rifts In Socially Ignorant Societies (C.R.I.S.I.S.) ~Did you mean "CAUSING" RIFTS IN SOCIALLY IGNORANT SOCIETIES?~

Oh -- and yo flow is nice too! --

Nothing spectacular / Nothing that we haven't seen already *on this board* / But still a nice introduction.

So are you with the SONO DEF, Whizzy Mang & SIDE FX crew too?

I'm just askin' cuz you use that / after each sentence of your flow -- (which is fine) -- *No Problem* -- It's just a personal peeve of mine

But you continue doing you and keep flowing, aaiight? --








A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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C.R.I.S.I.S
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Sun Mar-04-07 09:12 PM

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3. "RE: Hello ..."
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Thanks For the replys, yeah i ment causing, i was typing to fast, and i'm cool, with Sono and all of them, but i dont always use a slash that was old, but i put the slash to make it easy on the eyes. Thanks for the heads up.

Racism is a C.R.I.S.I.S
Causing Rifts In Socially Ignorant Societies


T.H.I.N.K
True Habitual Intelligence Needs Knowledge
Knowledge is key, Think

  

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phenom escobar
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Sun Mar-04-07 09:40 PM

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4. "RE: Hello ..."
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thats wassup crisis keep doing your thing mang

"the ink of a scholar is worth 10 times more than the blood of armada"

  

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SONO DEF
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Sun Mar-04-07 09:55 PM

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5. "We all in this"
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Me (Sono Def), Side Fx, Phenom Escobar, C.r.i.s.i.s, and whizzy are all in this, we all cool, this was dope Crisism still seems fresh, i know your new stuff will be on point

SONO MEANS I AM, ARE YOU?...

  

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SIDE FX
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Tue Mar-06-07 06:45 PM

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6. "RE: We all in this"
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Tue Mar-06-07 06:46 PM by SIDE FX

  

          

What up Crisis? Nice one.

  

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XadaboBangGud
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Tue Mar-06-07 07:55 PM

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7. "it is revealed (Mathew 11:25)"
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you just highlighted it. we are a godless nation
"Everyone did what was right in his own eyes." Judges 17:6 ; 21:25
Your writes is nice and it follows a biblical pattern emerging today:
1)people abandon the Lord
2)God punishes them by raising up a foreign power to oppress them
3)people cry out to God for deliverance
4)God raises a Deliverer or Judge for them

1 is done, we in the midst of 2

  

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Ezzsential
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Wed Mar-07-07 07:55 PM

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8. "\head nod"
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thats whats up innovative perspective

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...www.soundclick.com/ezzsentialsoul
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www.myspace.com/ezzsentialsoul
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html

  

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