I'm shivering, teeth chattering
Insecurities are blankets for fear...
Littering myself with grief rather than changing for the voices I hear...

Eventually these choices will force me to change my spots
Lost in a new jungle...
Gently strange in my plot, rumble young man, rumble
Before you're too old to rot...
Numb to the cost it takes to stumble, humble, and in love with the misery
But only a grudge is what its given me...

I mumble silhouettes of soldiers, they're my infantry on streets colder than expected
Respected, but they still limit me...
Pitted against a pool of snakes, with a school of words, yet no spears or stakes
They're stressed, a grimace, and still mimic me...

I'm sweating, pores open
Over confidence is a sauna for vanity...
Regretful ego stroking, provoking an Inferno where knowledge burns
And I'm stuck inside sanity...

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"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Here's a ticket to the Bahamas, and please have a spa treatment!

I relate to this, which worries me. I think it is a great piece of poetry and thoughtstream, especially in these wild times we live in.

Actually, it is almost like my helicopter trip, but without all the beautyment surrounding.

"Gently strange in my plot, rumble young man, rumble
Before you're too old to rot...>Numb to the cost it takes to stumble, humble, and in love with
the misery
But only a grudge is what its given me..."

I mumble silhouettes of soldiers, they're my infantry on
streets colder than expected
Respected, but they still limit me...
Pitted against a pool of snakes, with a school of words, yet
no spears or stakes
They're stressed, a grimace, and still mimic me...

I'm sweating, pores open
Over confidence is a sauna for vanity...
Regretful ego stroking, provoking an Inferno where knowledge
burns
And I'm stuck inside sanity..."

Wonderful piece of poetry, thought and insight and very much something I am scared to relate to and yet do...
The last line's a stunner.

Bless

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my
blue
song
http://au.briefcase.yahoo.com/bc/lilibluu/lst?&.dir=/blue/blue+thoughts+lunavamoloonerdco&.src=bc&.view=l

Take this man to da doctor -- *Terminally iLL* --

Well ...

Maybe just a slight fever and the shakes -- *chuckles*


But I like the interior rhyme scheme, as well as the overall theme and rhyme cadence.


You did the damn thang on this ONE! -- *YeP*


*Impressive*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it you checkin it. Hah dont worry bout relating to it, its probably worse for me since I wrote it. Thanks for the love, peace

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"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."