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Disclaimer:I mix my own music so first thing I notice is the mix in other people's shit.
This is Hip-Hop:
The vocals are too loud for such a mellow beat. In fact your delivery may be too energetic too, or maybe all that's just for the beginning of the song. Like the beat ramps up from near nothing, I'd have the vocals follow that pattern. The airplane sound 1:30 into it is too loud too I think, takes away from those couple words you said. The rhymes are ill, nothing wrong with those. Content is nice, words came clear. That was a plain old good song.
George Jefferson Stroll:
Nothing I'd change here, great song. Best line I caught:
<I>ain't rappin bout bling, is it a problem with that?</i>
Coffee Shop:
Perfect. Love the energy. First time hearing a hook from you, fits nicely with the rest of the song.
H.I.P.H.O.P.:
Great choice of beat, in fact all of em are great choices. Lyrics are ill, it'd be nice if you had the lyrics posted somewhere. One thing I'd change on this one is the doubles are a bit loud. They make your words hard to discern sometimes. But that's my preference.
Overall dude, you got mad potential and you well on your way to reaching it. The mixing issues are minor. I wonder how many different topics and kinds of song can you do as well. It's obvious that you're not the average rapper talking about bitches and bling, but can you make a good love song? How are your story joints? And as for needing beats, send me an email at knowledge3754@gmail.com and let me know how that situation is going, how much money you have to work with. I have connections to a decent number of beatmakers in my area, and me and my partner might even start managing some soon. Keep workin son, and holla at me bout beats
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