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deepthought74
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Thu Mar-01-07 02:22 PM

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"SCARED OF THE DARK"


  

          

“SCARED OF THE DARK”

One of these days
I’ll learn about underhanded payback
Under pressure
Losing my mind
Finally after 70, the past, it was all bad
Tired of being alone

Still no#1
Target practice
Breathless first words
Scared of the dark, eyes close, picture visions
Packed prisons destiny
Trapped, when will it stop?

Endangered species
Lethal injection assaults
Ready to die
Plotting witness pleas
Bad mouths raise young 14 rebels in training

Seashores photo
Snapshots of classroom failure
Chasing after skirts prophecy
Putting pussy’s anger down on paper

No remorse
Calling her bitch
Reading poems, prepare tomorrow for today screams

Natural woman message
Out the question I guess
Punish ask dreams
Panic nightmares oppression
So many tears rest
Going blind, show me some happiness

Calculated next move
Wasting ink, summer madness
Hard day work, clutching notebook’s passion
Want her to know
I want marriage to mean something
Besides arguments, jealousy, adultery

Not living in the past
Whispers of sweetheart name
Brings me close to memories
Suffering many years
Painting influence
Sunshine of my life novels

Afraid to put the book down
Temptations leaving
Last train good-bye
Moonlight depression already heard how time slips away
Cursive boasts
Black on black division
Legendary separation
Getting no sleep
Welcome to terrordome’s b-side

Self destruction topic
Jeopardize lives between lines
Sighs exhale
Selfish expressions
Thoughts of reality
Searching, yearbook’s furious infinity one
Righteous purpose writing letters
Only 25 when old school crushes
Replace sweet misery
Down to the knees
Endless flaws, character’s foul
Criminal minded nines
Really what battles, wake up conscious arguments
Check rhyme glory mate
Yesterday debacle
Spoken fiction, no need to risk queen’s superstar in basement’s
Controlled stimulation reply
Pick up another morning paper
Another warrior
Hard to swallow soliloquy
Front row
Roll call stance
Poetic insight
No flow, learn lessons, record lack of fears
Peers pressure
Champion of chocolate covered dreams
Found out what was missing from the start
Special place
Perfect one
On the run, like before
Unseen screams
Never be
School days
Blue magic exclusive
Hung up
Phone call
Requested
Old time
Corrupt bail
Life term
Behind words fine print
Contempt to remain stuck
In limitation meant
Stereotype, boxed in
Specific category
Thought process
Labeled anything except father, gentleman, flower in hand rebel
Blinded by fame’s jump shot
Quite the revolution before it delivers
Death row
Public enemy airplay
Explicit philosophy, mistreating my sisters
This shit is getting to me
Inferior thinking
Brainwashing your creative
Pick up a pen
Intimate horny little devil
Mainstream conditioning, red light
Abstract quotes
Putting pedestal’s importance in handwriting
Right eye guarantee
Loving nobody until my lips whisper
Wind blowing chaos
Down running sweat
Justified master
Evidence of blue sky
Rainy days
Prey, laugher evident
Putting my soul back in Hot July guarantee!

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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RE: SCARED OF THE DARK
Mar 02nd 2007
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RE: SCARED OF THE DARK
Mar 02nd 2007
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*Photo Has A Flashlight 4 Ya*
Mar 04th 2007
3

Travis Holden
Member since Feb 15th 2007
240 posts
Fri Mar-02-07 05:12 AM

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1. "RE: SCARED OF THE DARK"
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Hey I would have thought this would have got a few replies, this was very different, particularly the last stanza, with one word after another, I liked that part, original, creative and diff. nice piece.

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"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."

  

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ms mimi diva
Member since Feb 05th 2006
589 posts
Fri Mar-02-07 05:27 PM

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2. "RE: SCARED OF THE DARK"
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I'd like to hear this...yup...I would

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Sun Mar-04-07 02:13 PM

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3. "*Photo Has A Flashlight 4 Ya*"
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(((Neon Light))) --

Wow -- Certain words & phrases just jumped out at me like innna 3D picture:

>Breathless first words

>Lethal injection assaults

>Seashores photo -- ( of course, U said PHOTO -- )

>Putting pussy’s anger down on paper

>Moonlight depression already heard how time slips away

>Black on black division

>Hard to swallow soliloquy

>Champion of chocolate covered dreams

>Blue magic exclusive

>Labeled anything except father, gentleman, flower in hand rebel

>Blinded by fame’s jump shot

>Mainstream conditioning, red light

>Putting my soul back in Hot July guarantee!


*Word Mixxx~Master*


I likes ...




A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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