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Solomonchild
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Tue Feb-27-07 02:15 PM

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"phoenix.Gmsk."


  

          

Phoenix. Gmsk
The mid-lifers is blowin newports to Isley bros. 45's and,
Single Mothers carry formula home for they child and,
these aging criminal youth with prozac meds on the island,
My uncle kops platters of curry chicken in spanish harlem,
what i behold beloved words is redemption for the silent,
this mornin snow blessin me, winter sweat off his brow and,
public school kids, ill claim the lost as the found and,
serve education thru love 101 to the violent,
the homeless curl in corners gatherin heat to sleep sound &,
grated on steel while the corporate office eat proudly,
poundin me bill collectors tag us, light up our phones some channel thru mari-jane
or fly away to casinos to gamble, oh
mos snacthin they pendants on payday, while preachers is hosts to our burdens, tear stained we congregate,
heres the truth i see the scarred leavin swingin, heaven help us live steve wonder said the best in inner vision.
in hearin aaron neville bellow, what becomes of the broken hearted fella? the discovers dividing lines like othello,
reality intercourse responsibility is sanction, fruit of our labors good harvest stars in our matrix,
concrete blues, oh, ridin diggin the financial lofty throw change on expensive restaurant tables,
"le bec fin", blue fish, moet bottles they savor, while in the ghetto, bullets fly minority babes turn angels,
Im martin king j-r's advocate, the black child for this hour, my pains frame the opus to u.
my shame exposed is like focus to u, blackberry struggle is the culture to u, My Grace to pour is like oceans to u..
God we phoenix's while hope deferred burn us, the furnace, to bless the land of the living's surface.
Live.

I beloved I remain yours. GraceMusik.

  

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RE: phoenix.Gmsk.
Feb 27th 2007
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RE: phoenix.Gmsk.
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Travis Holden
Member since Feb 15th 2007
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Tue Feb-27-07 07:09 PM

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1. "RE: phoenix.Gmsk."
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concrete blues, oh, ridin diggin the financial lofty throw change on expensive restaurant tables,
"le bec fin", blue fish, moet bottles they savor, while in the ghetto, bullets fly minority babes turn angels,
Im martin king j-r's advocate, the black child for this hour, my pains frame the opus to u.
my shame exposed is like focus to u, blackberry struggle is the culture to u, My Grace to pour is like oceans to u..
God we phoenix's while hope deferred burn us, the furnace, to bless the land of the living's surface.
Live.

That was my favorite part, finished well, very good imagery, heartfelt, descriptive joint.

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"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."

  

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nappy_starr83
Member since Feb 27th 2007
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Wed Feb-28-07 05:35 PM

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this is my first time reading your work.i am impressed and will of course continue to visit your writings to see where your beautiful mind is. i love people who love the word and its obvious that you are one of those people.

live your dreams and you will love your life.

  

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Solomonchild
Member since Oct 03rd 2006
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Thu Mar-01-07 02:19 PM

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bless yall infinn..

I beloved I remain yours. GraceMusik.

  

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