West Side
Get in
Let's Ride

<Words I speak seep through and seek where you hide>

Style sleek
Rhyme complete

<Heavy hold it steady and shoot / Execute the plan nice and neat>

Fuck Niggers
White Sheets

<Mississippi's BURNING as I'm learning about my daddy being a sharecropper>

Get Back
Fuck That

<Lower comes the chopper here to rescue troops with shot off legs, missing their boots>

Get Black
Show Roots

<Pain and anger is no stranger / Poverty isn't just you and me/ Who had to watch TV with Foil and a Clothes Hanger??>

Church Revival
Holy Bible
Choir Rehearsal

<We're all the same, the cycle is universal/ My niggas put weed in lungs/ While our grandmothers speak in tongues/ Praying their little money will help pay for our college funds>


To be Continued...

Damn.Jus simple and meaningful

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
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Now i must tell you tho it rhymed it was broken by the captions which i so greatly appreciated there is much depth in this
i like this one Most a whole nuther form
yeh i likes this One

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

We're all the same, the cycle is universal/ My niggas put weed in lungs/ While our grandmothers speak in tongues/ Praying their little money will help pay for our college funds>

Simple and to the point, achieves objective nice post homie

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back in the day. This was received very well.

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cool piece.
i had fun reading it just cause there is so much to play around with. reading the piece through… ignoring the sectioned off (<…>) lines and reading just the 2 word lines … reading the sectioned off (<…>) lines without the 2 word lines…
and after all three approaches, i was left with the same feel which i really like.
circular piece… makes me think you don’t even need to mention cycles in the poem, b/c the poem itself is the cycle
thanks for sharing

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You outdid yo'self with creativity this time young man!


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I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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It means a great deal