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PG
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Wed Feb-14-07 12:35 PM

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"Throw mountains at me"


  

          


watch them tumble down into quarrys
I can handle the trials of a whole planet
with the graceful existence of a stars ease
cry as if gone too far please
and I'll shine reflection to mist away tears
blown with the stolen breath of our breeze
life's grandeur
doldrums to gusting to gale
beautiful, disgusting, no fail
the brains ain't so bad "never get out of the boat".. let's sail.

  

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RE: Throw mountains at me
Feb 14th 2007
1
Zappa me mine
Feb 15th 2007
2
RE: Zappa me mine
Feb 15th 2007
3
      lol ... excellent
Feb 15th 2007
4
This was a lovely piece
Feb 15th 2007
5
RE: Throw mountains at me
Feb 16th 2007
6
I'll do the Kool-Aid man through it "OH YEAH!" lol
Feb 16th 2007
7
      RE: I'll do the Kool-Aid man through it "OH YEAH!" lol
Feb 16th 2007
8
very cool
Feb 16th 2007
9
nice nice nice. the title is great
Feb 16th 2007
10
up
Nov 06th 2019
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Nowachaoticthing
Member since Dec 24th 2002
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Wed Feb-14-07 05:46 PM

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1. "RE: Throw mountains at me"
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Inspirational, uplifting, chest-thumping vibe. I like it.


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PG
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Thu Feb-15-07 12:08 PM

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2. "Zappa me mine"
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like walking to montana in sinister footwear
sliding video slime
through the garage in my zombie woof gear
eating hot snakes with willie
taking teeth out making yellow snow not knowing why it hurts
in your daddy's bottom drawer with frenchy and the dragon potion for your dirty love.

lol...

not stopping with the torture
till the churches and liquor stores come home

  

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freedomfighter
Member since Apr 03rd 2003
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Thu Feb-15-07 12:30 PM

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3. "RE: Zappa me mine"
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for my dirty love
ill roast a fish and a dove
to ball togue tied to a frozen wall
hoovering threw the halls
in a blood lion breast plate
making my nut wait
2 year no fears 2 exploid
the load is heavy
now police spot lite come to get me
living in a cemetry
looking for my above ground cuffin
dracula suck'n
denairo from pharoah
tomb in the center of warriors room
flesh engulf doom of bush administration
in a blink of an eye castration
uno reverse skip a whole nation
she call'n me messah
because i walked threw the fire
hebrew gossip news i steall drink brew
and sue the righteous
for standing in my way
up lifting the wicked
screwing you in a spicket
call me liquid
i'm on an ice cream cone sliding down you fingers
remember i love the poor
to them i show my self poor
materailly rich in spirituality
call you can't call this mastery
even though i trick off you reallity
going on 8 minutes
nascar Jesus i'm finished
hang on you cross
you lost idol
around you neck
viral
freedom
rings

so go ahead and sing
chasity charity will save the lady
from hash cookies and herbal pills!


Freeworld Order
Dangurus Mines

  

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PG
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Thu Feb-15-07 12:34 PM

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4. "lol ... excellent"
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good to see you fam.

  

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PepperRutledge
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Thu Feb-15-07 03:42 PM

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5. "This was a lovely piece"
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Just a bit the break from the norm...I'm inspired to write an inspirational poem.



Delirious gorgeous goddess whispers purple enormously

  

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gsquared
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Fri Feb-16-07 05:49 AM

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6. "RE: Throw mountains at me"
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Fri Feb-16-07 05:50 AM by gsquared

          

..duck, here comes one...

  

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PG
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Fri Feb-16-07 11:21 AM

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7. "I'll do the Kool-Aid man through it "OH YEAH!" lol"
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freedomfighter
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8. "RE: I'll do the Kool-Aid man through it "OH YEAH!" lol"
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whipped but no maricle
ouch my back is broken
composition winning on mat lee's
intercepting precept laws fist attack
nothing lacking

so why the fuck don't you smile more!

lol

  

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ThaAnthology
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Fri Feb-16-07 12:14 PM

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9. "very cool"
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I liked it!

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Jon
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Fri Feb-16-07 03:46 PM

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10. "nice nice nice. the title is great"
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PG
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11. "up"
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