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ASIEM
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Wed Feb-14-07 12:53 AM

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"i write"


  

          

das right
i write.
i gotda right
ta tap
what i feel
what i think
what i care for
i write
ta drop thought on paper
ta take back time lost
at the cost of being me
when it really wasn't about ... 'me'
i write
to remember things i would forget
like how it felt
when she left
i write to stay on top
of moments like now
when sleep won't
let me lay down
yeh i write
like poets and griot's
tellin short stories
findin hero's
n she'roes
in alleys
long lost to derelictions
lulliby n city life news
i write ta right wrongs
i did in da dark
i even write to make others start
find a spark
in little corners way deep
inside that little hole left
from guilts residue
i write cause i aint got nothin else ta do...RIGHT?

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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RE: i write
Feb 14th 2007
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RE: i write
Feb 14th 2007
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I Like ...
Feb 15th 2007
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RE: I Like ...
Feb 15th 2007
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RE: i write
Feb 15th 2007
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NinaJSpeaks
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Wed Feb-14-07 06:41 PM

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1. "RE: i write"
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Hey...it has been a minutes since I have read your work (this piece and in the absence of love) and I see you are still a poet par excellent!

You captured the purpose of writing in poetic prose...I think we all write to remember, to inspire, to be...because what else would we do if we didn't... Thanks for the inspiration.

Peace
~~~~~~

"My country needs me, and if I were not here, I would have to be invented." -Hortense J. Spillers

http://www.myspace.com/ninajspeaks

  

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ASIEM
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Wed Feb-14-07 11:12 PM

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thank you somehow i may have missed you but i peeped your blod lot's of poetry u write thanks for "Blackmen"

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Thu Feb-15-07 09:53 AM

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How U write ...

Why U write ...

And every time you write -- I LIKES --


U Hero
Me She~ro? --

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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ASIEM
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Thu Feb-15-07 05:49 PM

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are u flirting with me u sassy exotic wonderful big brown eyed fulllipped sexy intelligent inspiring hell of a photosyntheic blend of wisdom and feminine power all wrapped in the form of a poet?


"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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rukudzo
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Thu Feb-15-07 09:55 AM

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yes you do write ... a feeling and a reason in words
i like this

peace

  

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