Instead of feeling sorry for myself
How bout I try rebirth of a nation
CandyAppled, extended, exchanges
Loops and Potholes distort my vision
We both know the destinations of our paths
We fought the good fight and LOST
This is a scence
This is a silent movement!
Don’t plague me with diversions
I’m on to your little fucking game
Actually







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now looka here you got my attention for real cause u well u got it now...
show me some range spit dat talent or is this a moment to vent and feel withdrawal from ?

now "Actually" i know u got skillz make me a fan

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

>now looka here you got my attention for real cause u well u
>got it now...
>show me some range spit dat talent or is this a moment to vent
>and feel withdrawal from ?

Well venting evoked this but this isnt a vent. I consider it to be a piece. I got the emotion from being pissed, but I put thought into my words.


>now "Actually" i know u got skillz make me a fan

Oh my! Bows to you*....thank you very much....hehehe






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ok so let me piss u off / on whatever it takes push that form that content that power i feel inside you and write damnit lmao feel me tho
dark berries got sweet juice and so it is wit dark pain
so...
poet drop it

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

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"Actually"
"Talking to myself"
is
"A Mess"
so
"Can we Go Back"
where
"Psuedo Images of the Heart"
are found in simple words of
"Haiku"

paint a picture (in words) of being invisible that's a topic i had to undertake recently i pass it to you, Poet.


"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

No One Knows Me

Unsatisfying to the eye
A loner in deep thought
Conforms to its oppression
Pleading with sight to lend an ear
Seeing is to victory
As
Death is to remembrance
Seclusion have your mercy
Upon which I have no control over
It is my destiny

















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thats it you got a fan i'm watchin you
not even an abrupt ending either
seem like you know a little summin bout bein unseen too
nice wordplay

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

In that case...i'm watching you as well! ; )!

Thank ya,thank ya.

Yea a took a little first hand experience.


>thats it you got a fan i'm watchin you
>not even an abrupt ending either
>seem like you know a little summin bout bein unseen too
>nice wordplay





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Aren't all those pieces long gone? Where did u look them up at...or have you been following my work.



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if you arrange your board according to author and look alphabetically all of your work still on board will show

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

But ll of them didnt come up ....grrr


I forgot what I even said in those pices and I cant find em anywhere.



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i forgot to mention the one "Gurl leave that nigga alone"
7 pieces all sittin an waitin for you

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

interesting topic...


being invisible
a middle child
find a way
for them to see you
invisible Being smiled

invisible has no voice
although
thoughts do manifest
don't look in the mirror
a picture of nothing
elevate your self
through inner reflection

positive vision
a mind
not ego driven
mingle with intelligence
it's the unseen
and unheard
reunion
said invisible I'm Being

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ink about a thought.

I felt a sense of one being uplifted but at the end I felt the person just accepted the fact that they really could not do anything about there situation.



Thanx for building!

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>No One Knows Me
>
>Unsatisfying to the eye
>A loner in deep thought
>Conforms to its oppression
>Pleading with sight to lend an ear
>Seeing is to victory
>As
>Death is to remembrance
>Seclusion have your mercy
>Upon which I have no control over
>It is my destiny
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Seeing is to victory
As
Death is to remembrance

i like that phrase, very jazzy.

I like that part to.....it holds a lot of truth when invisible has human traits....personification








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"Loops and Potholes distort my vision"

best line of the piece by far...seems like an unfinished piece that abruptly ended....not as strong as ya previous post but holds its stature none the less...peace

"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

I always end my pieces abruptly...i dont like to finish lol.

def not as strong...but i didnt like sit down and write this or try to make it better.

I just wanted to write something down becuase something annoyed me.


Than for the input tho...i love it


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...that the subject isn't quite as clever as they think they are.

Like the other one of yours I read, I like this.

It is better to fail aiming high
Than to succeed aiming low
And we
Have set our sights very high
So high in fact that even failure
Will have in it an echo of glory

Surprisingly enough the two has the same focus
Just different feelings on my part
but yea not smart at all lol

thanx for sharing babe



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I like your lil' rants, vents, or as I call em' -- *Brain Farts* --


~Off Da Top Niceness~


But I see where ASIEM is commin' from -- Your flow leaves the reader hungry for more data -- More info -- More drama ...


Keep dangling the carrot -- We're following U -- *hehehe*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

>I like your lil' rants, vents, or as I call em' -- *Brain
>Farts* --

Thank you hahaha...yes they pretty much are that.


>~Off Da Top Niceness~


oooo I like how that sounds lol


>But I see where ASIEM is commin' from -- Your flow leaves the
>reader hungry for more data -- More info -- More drama ...

& You should know by now that I like it that way lol...Caused its finished in my head and I like when the poems are to be continued esq lol.....But alas...maybe I wont be selfish anymore but then again I like short pieces....Maybe I'll do some Haikus again lol I dunno blah....I just got an inspiration for another peice...time to get the pen and the pad out! lol

>Keep dangling the carrot -- We're following U -- *hehehe*

Watching me huh? lol Well shit I'm watching you guys too...hmph!

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This sounds lil pissed/emotional but at the same time calculated and thought out, more than a rant, I love it nice work

---
"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."

I paid attention to my word play....it might time calculated becuase something happened at that moment that pissed me off so I came to the boards and wrote what I felt.
Thanx for sharing tho

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