i follow your scent
to the corner of the bed

and find your lips
lingering in the sunlight

the morning without your kiss
is a daylight doomed to overcast

eventually your body's breath and print
intoxicate me to retrace steps

to pause and document the moment
as it fleets to future uncertainty

alana,
this empty luxury of memory
is all i have to hold

save me from the concentrated
absence of your warmth,

the hollow rhythm of days and nights
without you.

pure poetry in the raw, nice 1 . .

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

made me reminisce on the heart-ache and pain from certain events in my past.

the morning without your kiss
is a daylight doomed to overcast

eventually your body's breath and print
intoxicate me to retrace steps

truly emotional, honest, and sincere. Peace~

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i'm not ready to make
nice ©the dixie chicks

makes lovin stronger
or at least looked forward too again
and again and again
mornin till night till next week and next year ... thanks for the reminder

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

the men are really holding it down on the boards!...well versed, beautifully rendered and solid writing...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

I like this, you opened up with honesty and imagery and thats why it takes you to that state. good work

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"Every Golden Age is as much an act of disregard as it is of felicity."

>the morning without your kiss
>is a daylight doomed to overcast

>eventually your body's breath and print
>intoxicate me to retrace steps


^This^ just sounds so soul~fully sensual -- Full & rich with poetic flava! -- *Yummmy*



*Delectably Delicious*


I do have an issue with the "fleets" vs. flees line, but I'm no expert in grammar placement so I'mmma let you look that one ^UP^ if you so desire --

>"to pause and document the moment
>as it fleets to future uncertainty

Edit: Never mind -- I looked it up -- I think it's okay! -- *thumbs up*

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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the opening lines lured me in
and your imagery always amazes and inspires me


you're one of my favourite poets here


peace

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