I torture myself everyday with the thought of you
I'm sorry I love you
You told me it would hurt one day
Insecurites peaked by differences of me
Its too late
Incubation of life too late
Can you be tall?









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is just a little too short for your or the character's taste? or am i waaaaaayyyyyyy off? LOL. i liked the fact that you ended it with "Can you be tall," sort of posing a question that has no answer, yet... in a way, wanted it answered anyway so you or the character could feel good about herself.

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It is a little hard to understand...but response 2 gave the perfect explantion of it.
It is about a man,myself and the issue of love.....after I express that love I kinda come to a realization the probably nothing can bring our love together(incubation of life=not even a child....Insecurities of differences of me is like....im insecure when I see this man with other women...so i second guess myself...but i realize there is nothing I can do about the situation and I kinda turn to him for answers...in asking him...Can you be tall?

I hoped that helped you out a little lol

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before i get to the poem u r a member since 2006 with over 3000 posts? i have never seen you before idon't think. ok is that you in the icon?
now the poem is love released
and then waiting to be picked up again if only?
i can relate

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

ok is
>that you in the icon?

Yes it is me in my icon.

>now the poem is love released
>and then waiting to be picked up again if only?
>i can relate

My goodness you hit it right on the head. That is exactly what I was feeling when I wrote this. Couldn't have put it in laymans better myself lol.


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its an interesting drop here that can be takin many ways from many people...i like ya word hustle..or excuse me...word placement...its nicely done...peace

"dude, the only thing i fear is your hair cut.. what is that a mop glued to your head? come on man... style up."-Bartek

all across ya forhead and cheek bones...i break facials and reconstruct beauty to ugly...im an artist mang...Lincoln Picasso Van Gogh

The piece was mostly driven by the abscence of reciprocity in love between two people who were once together.....and are now trying to restore it.





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Hey pretty lady! --

Nice 2 C U again on Freestyle -- Where U been?

U just passin' thru -- Or U gonna stick around for a while?


I enjoyed reading your flow -- But got a lil' confused at the end ...

So ...

Are we talkin' TALL as in stature/height? -- Or are we talking -- Being a BIG man mentally -- (as opposed to thinking or being small and/or small minded)


~~Nice Flow~~

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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>Hey pretty lady! --

Hehe
>
>Nice 2 C U again on Freestyle -- Where U been?
>U just passin' thru -- Or U gonna stick around for a while?

Nice to come across you too...i have to take sometime away from the net and get focused...I'll be here a while (c)311



>I enjoyed reading your flow -- But got a lil' confused at the
>end ...
>
>So ...
Response number two is a perfect explanation of the piece.but to answer yr question...Can you be tall? as in can you be strong...can you tell me exactly what you want...can you not be childish about the situation.
In the begining....i express my feeling...in the middle i kinda say there no hope...and in the end I just kinda dump the situation into his hands.

>
>Are we talkin' TALL as in stature/height? -- Or are we talking
>-- Being a BIG man mentally -- (as opposed to thinking or
>being small and/or small minded)
>
>
>~~Nice Flow~~

Thanx!


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keep shining!

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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...

Every chance I get ; )





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I really like the way you ended it with that last line. I'm pretty sure a lot of us feel your pain, which makes everything you wrote here so easy to understand.

to me, at least.





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It is better to fail aiming high
Than to succeed aiming low
And we
Have set our sights very high
So high in fact that even failure
Will have in it an echo of glory

& there def was a lot of pain invovled....I might have even bee crying when I wrote this.....I loving feeling bad cause I come up with the strongest feelings and emotions on paper. Kinda twisted I knw lol
It seems I get more writing out of sadness rather than happiness.
Thanx for sharing


O yea....I'm still swooning over u in gd lol...but I keep it to myself...; )



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>It seems I get more writing out of sadness rather than
>happiness.

Yeah, unfortunately that's usually how it goes. As weird as it sounds, sometimes sadness can be a beautiful thing. As long as it's not all the time, y'know?


>O yea....I'm still swooning over u in gd lol...but I keep it
>to myself..

Haha...thanks. Plus, c'mon...have you seen YOU? WOW. But I guess I need to keep that to myself too.

It is better to fail aiming high
Than to succeed aiming low
And we
Have set our sights very high
So high in fact that even failure
Will have in it an echo of glory

maybe, just maybe i can . .

they showed us phYsically, we could reach infinitY, but mentally, through the century, we lost our identitY
-Rakim

Who do u think would benifit more?




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Yr that little boy I used to beat up on the playground everyday at recess.





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"simply irresistable" look at the hits BLING

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

>"simply irresistable" look at the hits BLING

*Blushes*

Why thank you




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i really love your one two punch style of writing...it's so light yet full of EVERYTHING you could possibly want to say without wasting one word...was dug...miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

>i really love your one two punch style of writing...it's so
>light yet full of EVERYTHING you could possibly want to say
>without wasting one word...was dug...miss k

Why thank you very...thats cute one two punch style of writing..i likey it.



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