"had to get this off my chest" Thu Jan-25-07 02:15 AM by injyl
u think u are the first man that promised me everything promised me love unconditionally injest told me how he would like to drink my bath water tell me at best we would have a beautiful daughter u think u the first man thats told me how soft I was to the touch of your hand u think u are the first man that recited me poetry talked about getting to know me kissed my hand instead of my cheek just to show me making the akward gestures a sign of sincerity so quick to talk about forever b4 we've even been intimate or talking a week to all of this I say brother please I am not a tease but this suff no longer makes me weak it does not even appease my unease brought on my years of falling in love again and how this time its gonna be different but always the same just a new face and a little higher rent and to most this might seem a man haters vent but its really a soliliquey of a women no longer searching 4 love eternally just some space in time filled with tranquility and maybe afternoon lunches for two with rice and peas and sharing some mango tea under a nice shade tree feeling the sun on my face and a gentle summer breeze replace cupids complexities with lifes simplicities
1. "RE: had to get this off my chest" In response to Reply # 0
*Welcome 2 Freestyle*
I don't remember seeing you around here B~4 -- Tho I know you're not new to OKP -- But your flow was very nice!
Glad U got it off your chest -- *smiles*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
3. "I have to say you remind me of something" In response to Reply # 0
cue R Kelly background music...
LOL NO you remind me of writer's block. Old OKP what this forum was created for...I liked reading this and then figuring out who you were and then reading it again. Keep shining! Welcome.
_____________________________________ WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN
I swear I'm a marry an OKP
Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...
7. "RE: had to get this off my chest" In response to Reply # 0
building faith for the future but establishing confidence for the present pounding on your protector a cold personal barrier holy water lesson i see my passion is unworthy because you been swamp wit guy spit that was all about hard dicks and beat seat quickies in a package of cookies come on please never thoufght you was a tease but str forward fuck holding yo hand i'm trying to get the plane to land wit a vision not a word of poetry like you say you don't know me only heard of me yo majesty feeling lonely in search for someone to share your pirch but still kissing the hurt of old inffliction missing the person whose been right hear threw your tears your fears getting and understanding of your cares it's only fair to give up give in stop tripping it's all about you how true but between seconds and minutes bet i can change it turning mudd pies into twinkling stars in champan skies sounds like more lies but i ain't no politian weeping for electing of husbandship don't do courtship or romance shit i just hit like rebels having sugar fits!
nice work load is light when you find the right doctor
14. "my mouth tastes like purple" In response to Reply # 12
honestly Im not that deep LOL it is what it is me getting some feelings off my chest about the games men play : ) Tuggin inbetween Islam and straight Thuggin ~ Thought
15. "RE: my mouth tastes like purple" In response to Reply # 14
This was awesome. I'm impressed. Even tho I normally feel that I'm one of the men that truly r an exception, the perfect gentleman type, I must admit that this is powerful. I don't know how deep this came off 2 u as being the creator, but this clearly illustrates victory in being traped in a vicious cycle. It also depicts your self worth. U r very valuable. U keep up the good work. WELCOME, and stay blessed
2Lettas-1Love----JESUS------
"And it's not that You're passive; Its just that Your grace is as active as Your wrath should be" -Crossmovement's PHANATIK
18. "RE: * hugs you* yeah its the last straw piece lol" In response to Reply # 16
Enjoyed this greatly. Made me remember when I met my wife, how we both tried to mesmorize each other with our poems. It wasnt till we got away from that, that the real poetry began. Mad love and respect for this piece. ________________________________________ "With peace and love in my lungs, I hold my breath until the Poet returns."
19. "powerfilled" In response to Reply # 0 Fri Dec-14-07 12:41 AM by ASIEM
Gospel truth experience is a great teacher the only factor that is never the same is LOVES expression now that u got that off your chest ingest this...
"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..." ASIEM "Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran (Be and it is) " A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder
20. "RE: had to get this off my chest" In response to Reply # 0
>u think u are the first man that promised me everything >promised me love unconditionally >injest told me how he would like to drink my bath water > tell me at best we would have a beautiful daughter >u think u the first man >thats told me how soft I was to the touch of your hand >u think u are the first man that recited me poetry >talked about getting to know me >kissed my hand instead of my cheek just to show me >making the akward gestures a sign of sincerity >so quick to talk about forever >b4 we've even been intimate or talking a week >to all of this I say brother please >I am not a tease >but this suff no longer makes me weak >it does not even appease my unease >brought on my years of falling in love again >and how this time its gonna be different >but always the same just a new face and a little higher rent >and to most this might seem a man haters vent >but its really a soliliquey >of a women no longer searching 4 love eternally >just some space in time filled with tranquility >and maybe afternoon lunches for two with rice and peas >and sharing some mango tea under a nice shade tree >feeling the sun on my face and a gentle summer breeze >replace cupids complexities with lifes simplicities > >
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