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seraph219
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Wed Nov-29-06 11:45 PM

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"The Letters"


          

THE LETTERS

At last he learns the whole
is more
than his eyes

can hold or keep at bay
with a blink.

Life extends beyond
his pocketful

of pens, beyond the scope of his poems.
Light designs: at best, false-
bottom containers.

One million
lines, like sculpted arms,
made to embrace

themselves, rumor, and silence.

http://www.myspace.com/notebook00

  

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id like to see this idea expanded
Nov 30th 2006
1
I agree
Nov 30th 2006
2
Slick
Nov 30th 2006
3

rgv
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Thu Nov-30-06 08:28 PM

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1. "id like to see this idea expanded"
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Life extends beyond
his pocketful

i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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ms mimi diva
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Thu Nov-30-06 08:40 PM

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2. "I agree"
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One million
lines, like sculpted arms,
made to embrace


Beautiful attention to form. I liked the clean feeling to this, and loved the image above. This image is so powerful I would like to see you start off where your passion is.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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ToeJam
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Thu Nov-30-06 08:45 PM

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3. "Slick"
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