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jayare214
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Wed Nov-29-06 05:42 AM

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"clay buttefly (haiku)"


          

Her clay malleable
So she shifted to their tastes
Now I miss her shape.

my music group:
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http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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      your haiku brought it out of me...
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Morehouse
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Wed Nov-29-06 05:35 PM

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in the sky were clouds
her lips slowly slip from mine
i breathe thunderstorms



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myself is sculptor of
your body’s idiom:
the musician of your wrists;
the poet who is afraid
only to mistranslate
a rhythm in your hair...
-E.E. Cummings

  

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jayare214
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Wed Nov-29-06 10:13 PM

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nice.... always respected your talent...

my music group:
http://www.facebook.com/beataroundabush
http://www.lastfm.com/beataroundabush
http://www.reverbnation.com/beataroundabush
http://www.myspace.com/beataroundabush

My beats:
www.myspace.com/jayarejohnson

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/no

  

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Morehouse
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Thu Nov-30-06 04:56 PM

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thanks for the beautiful words
and the inspiration.

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Nov-29-06 11:36 PM

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Yessssss --

The original shape has been altered ...

But the clay is still pliable ...

Mold it back! --


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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