Knowing its forbidden I curved my instinct and lay back His locks fell gently upon his neck Begging for me to caress them Yet I resist His movements so fluid and undeniable Pleading with me to thrust my hips With eyes of adornment upon mine leaving me helpless to his will Crying could only come of this We're secret gazers...umseemingly to thee eye Hoping to one day seal our thoughts with a swing flying high Not wanting to walk down the same road twice...smiling while remembering that inner advice Gurl leave that nigga alone!
>this was cool...it got a couple of warm smiles outta me...
Hehe thanx...awww it did..that so cute...while writing it I felt like I was losing sight of why I was writing it lol...I started to get into him more than the fact that I'm trying not to be into him lol. So leave that nigga alone popped into my head lol
3. "This Ain't Finished!!!" In response to Reply # 0
Continue --
Okay, okay -- -- But I especially liked the ways these lines read:
>We're secret gazers >unseemingly to thee eye >Hoping to one day seal our thoughts >with a swing flying high >Not wanting to walk down the same road twice
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
Maybe you can re~visit it at another time -- *Add On*
Just don't 4~get to include the original joint, so we'll know it's a continuation.
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Any time between now and Christmas will be fine -- *hehehe* --
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
12. "RE: LoL ok...and umm you're silly I like you" In response to Reply # 6
Ready to continue? --
And while you're at it -- Go 'head on and stick a pic in the "Phreestyle Photo" thread ^UP^ above -- Become ONE with the Freestyle family.
That shyt usually goes in the archives later, nahmean?
*Carry On*
A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence -- I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥
7. "I know she wants to leave me alone" In response to Reply # 0
Like I am forbidden I know she suppressed herself when she laid back I see her smile as she glances at my locks I love when she touches them I make sure that I waste no movements, I am deliberate I want her to want me like I want her The depth of her eyes, only Atlantic knows deeper her lips quiver in my stare My eyes try to whisper secret words to her mind Each second leaves us weightless, not bound by now as we dance in tomorrow We leave yesterday behind... I leave yesterday behind.... I hope she can too... I was so different a day ago ---------------------------------------------------------------------
8. "RE: I know she wants to leave me alone" In response to Reply # 7
>Like I am forbidden >I know she suppressed herself when she laid back >I see her smile as she glances at my locks >I love when she touches them >I make sure that I waste no movements, I am deliberate >I want her to want me like I want her >The depth of her eyes, only Atlantic knows deeper >her lips quiver in my stare >My eyes try to whisper secret words to her mind >Each second leaves us weightless, not bound by now >as we dance in tomorrow >We leave yesterday behind... >I leave yesterday behind.... >I hope she can too... >I was so different a day ago >--------------------------------------------------------------------- > >just my take on HIS thoughts right then too.
Woooooooooooow....Brav muthafreakin O lol I loved that...it was amazing....so perfect...so captured the exact same feelings I had....*Bows To You*
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