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deepthought74
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Thu Oct-05-06 01:49 PM

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"ALL I NEED IS A PEN"


  

          

“ALL I NEED IS A PEN”

Another black girl lost
Exploited by business suits, tie
Henchmen
We need to be more conscious on how our daughters are raised
Righteous steps
Express vocabulary spill
Begins with black zombie
Poisoning violin
Out of town emotion
Committing sins
Coming in contact
With well develop thickness
Mentality needs to grow

Separate love you
From just fucking you!
Tomorrow punctuation becoming handcuff marriage
Cheated ritual
Toast burial grounds
Consisting of thugs, kings
Seen plenty
Breathless, loud starving
Vividly describe last day’s spectacle
Weekends famous for one night stands
Creating possible riots in first child
Unlock tears plan
Life scarred
Vicious cycle
One time mistake waiting for next man grudge
To have her trapped
Inflict more pain
Off guard
Scream future plans
Erase intelligent dreams of doctor, lawyer
Ambitious orders
Back track to early times
When top of the list flight
Painted pictures of lovely, main squeeze quest

Mission complete
Dirt on your soul
Young nigga dream
To take away
Hour glass perfection
Laughing during candlelight, last supper serve
Used to boast
About playing with young
Complete
Child play
Loud mouths still talking
Her rep flawed
Revolution needs to be televised
To show
Existence between time, spent alone
Women get married
While easy one, species
Remains solo
Frozen words of wisdom profit
Discuss rapid
Baby mother’s investment
Not enough wives
Connect
High class product
Drunk
Empty horizontal promise
Sleeping across fairy tale
Unplug version
Explicit
Sincerely yours becoming stranger’s edit
Incomplete
Average long distance
Conspicuous statement got long walks
Hanging
Pleasing kidnap plan
Real heavy hitter separation
In top priority continue on
Massacre!

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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RE: ALL I NEED IS A PEN
Oct 05th 2006
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Oct 06th 2006
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ASIEM
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Thu Oct-05-06 08:30 PM

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1. "RE: ALL I NEED IS A PEN"
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...and a mind to scribe upon to make a paradigm shift
imagine that...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ToeJam
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Fri Oct-06-06 12:02 PM

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I love the style this is written in.

Not at all what I expected from the title. Nice work. Vivid, yet still open.

  

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