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revalation
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Tue Oct-03-06 10:48 PM

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"The Bridge"


  

          

The bridge

Swinging
Breaking
Falling
Taking
Lives
Halting traffic
Communities
Weaning
Relationships
Waining
And I held the knife
forsaking
Love
I am the one
Who destroyed connections
Across an ocean
From the depths to the lands end
I cut the ropes
Holding
Storing
Potential
That was growing
One false step
Feet stuck between the crack
crying
regretting
wishing
For forgiveness
Hoping he will grab my hand




<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

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very
Oct 04th 2006
1
RE: very
Oct 09th 2006
3
This line alone sliced through it all...
Oct 04th 2006
2
RE: This line alone sliced through it all...
Oct 09th 2006
4

mindful
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Wed Oct-04-06 06:12 PM

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1. "very"
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appropriate title:

fave lines:

I cut the ropes
Holding
Storing
Potential
That was growing
One false step
Feet stuck between the crack
crying
regretting
wishing
For forgiveness
Hoping he will grab my hand

it's good to see you posting regularly again. Peace~

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Pinwheels and HulaHoops|the book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.blogspot.com|the life

La magie, est dans ses yeux.
le prodige est dans son âme.

  

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revalation
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Mon Oct-09-06 09:59 PM

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3. "RE: very"
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Give Thanks Sis!


<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat

  

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ms mimi diva
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Wed Oct-04-06 06:17 PM

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2. "This line alone sliced through it all..."
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And I held the knife

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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revalation
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4. "RE: This line alone sliced through it all..."
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Yes...now...I'm done with destruction..building Love to the heights of my minds end..


<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat

  

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