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revalation
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Tue Sep-26-06 06:59 PM

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"I am Watching You"


  

          

Some of the times gone by
without a noticing eye
I am watching you
walking as fast as you can
without even noticing
without a noticing eye
some of the time goes by unnoticed

Blank eyes
Open Wide
No Expression without a smile

Sometimes I know you cry
without a noticing eye
I am watching you
moving without a care for your life
without even noticing
without a noticing eye
some of the time goes by unnoticed

Blank eyes
Open wide
No acceptance in rejection

Sometimes I see your light
without a noticing eye
I am watching you
expressing and accepting
who you are
without even noticing
without a noticing eye
some of the time goes by unnoticed



<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
i like this
Sep 26th 2006
1
RE: i like this
Sep 26th 2006
2
      <<smiling from both of your responses>>
Sep 26th 2006
3
           RE: <<smiling from both of your responses>>
Sep 27th 2006
4

mindful
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Tue Sep-26-06 07:06 PM

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1. "i like this"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

it reminds me of a form of writing (which escapes me now) that we had to do for my poetry class back during my college days *dang what is the name of that darn form*... this was refreshing.

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Pinwheels and HulaHoops|the book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
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La magie, est dans ses yeux.
le prodige est dans son âme.

  

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ms mimi diva
Member since Feb 05th 2006
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Tue Sep-26-06 08:51 PM

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2. "RE: i like this"
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I agree. I would love to *hear* it.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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revalation
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Tue Sep-26-06 09:02 PM

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3. "<<smiling from both of your responses>>"
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..yeah...It just came through..if there is a style to it I would love to know so I can at least say I know how to write in that particular style ...didn't know....

you two are a couple of my favorite writers on here and it feels good to have feedback from ya'll...

and sis ...I just might record it..sultry..smooth..dim bar type of sound to it...

Love to you two...

<Peace is better with dark chocoate and red wine>


<<<<<<<<<I take a thought and expand upon it.
I turn it around and upside down to get another perspective>>>>>>>>>>>>

www.myspace.com/hearheartbeat

  

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Azheiz
Member since Sep 25th 2006
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Wed Sep-27-06 12:57 AM

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4. "RE: <<smiling from both of your responses>>"
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A very peaceful piece..I hope to read more

  

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