Handing actually done this in a while.....just wanting to get some repsonses and possibly a few pointers...



I creatively crucify cowards
Hand stitch their faces
To their fingers
Leave pain lingering
From head to toe
A full body blow
Just as if they
Ran in front of a
Tractor trailer
I'm a smooth sailor
The metaphorical mariner
Throwing 'em out at sea
Giving no mercy
The thirsty get
1000 leagues to swallow..
And 8 additional inches
Wallow in your self pity
I get grittier
Than a John Grisham novel
Too many rap cats are hollow
But my poetic presence
Make me a tough act to follow
All these emcees are chimpanzees
Flinging excrement
Unable to properly
Kill the beat like me
Knifing it until
It's leaking profusely
You can't defuse me
I'm a bag filled with C4
Waiting at your door.......

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