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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
1659 posts
Sat Sep-16-06 02:50 PM

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"Just deserts."


  

          





Yo,i drop bombs against the mass,
never settle for second class,
straight ghetto,gun metal,
fly face,stelletos,
curves so superb,undescribable verbs,
occur when i transfer the poetics,
mixed with the genetics,
and collect this,
this young blitz,spits fire,no need for oven mitts,
and clips insert when i drop,its a desert,
a trifle to ya ears,
spit that fear,
listen real clear,
when i drop,ya ear drums pop,
see how the police start using glocks,
promoting gun violence coz i broke the silence.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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RE: Just deserts.
Sep 17th 2006
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RE: Just deserts.
Sep 17th 2006
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lunaeco
Member since Dec 13th 2002
1375 posts
Sun Sep-17-06 06:57 AM

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1. "RE: Just deserts."
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I like the personal power style of this piece.
Don't know if I'd trust the "no oven mitts" part -got burn last week, literally, so don't remind me please. Solid flow and mizing in the words and rhymes, so keep on keeping on doing what ypi dp with words.
bless

"undescribable verbs,
>occur when i transfer the poetics,
>mixed with the genetics,
>and collect this,
>this young blitz,spits fire,no need for oven mitts,
>and clips insert when i drop,its a desSert"

~~~


my
blue
song
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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
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Sun Sep-17-06 07:36 AM

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2. "RE: Just deserts."
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Thanks for peepin,see you round.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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