Good grief, you'll make me cry, and that's very easy. What a gorgeous poem and what a way to express and compare grief and pain and all these wonders.
I wish I'd read this last year, 5 years ago, other times when I needed to relate life and pain and death and found a prayer like this to express some of what I felt. THank You.
"The wonder of a brand new life, A work of absolute perfection, Does wonders for a soul In need of healing."
2. "RE: Thank you, sweet" In response to Reply # 1
Thank you Lunaeco - this was important to me. I'm not sure if you read my preceeding poem titled "I Need..." but this was kind of an answer to that one.
It was such a beautiful experience and it really did begin my healing process. I still have my days but I can always look back to that moment and remember that life is too precious to waste it by being upset so much. I know that it's going to take more of these experiences and other things in order to fully heal...but that's why I titled it "Part 1"
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thank you for taking the time to read it and respond.
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