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WILDOUT
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Mon Sep-11-06 12:20 AM

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"heartbroken soft spoken tear soaken melodies"


  

          

Sometimes i feel so worthless
it makes me want to cry
my thoughts are suicidal
but I don't want to die
sometimes i feel so hopeless
broken beyond repair
I'm trapped inside the darkness
of the deepest despair
sometimes i just cant focus
beneath all the pain
knowing the only love that could sooth it
has put it in my brain
heartbroken feels heartbroken
no matter where you are
like your life has been stolen
or theyve snuffed out the stars
and all I've really wanted
was to be in your arms
I cant see all around me
tears flood out of my eyes
no smile can hide this sadness
i cant control my thoughts
my mind is lost and moonless
inside the deepest dark
i close these eyes in terror
these thoughts are not my own
i try to change my mindset
but still i find no rest
i fear now that this vacation
will be my spirits death
if anyone else had told me
i would have called them liars
that hands that bring me heaven
could feed me to the fire
i feel as though im walking
towards nothing at all
all of my great perception
has fallen in the fall

  

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RE: heartbroken soft spoken tear soaken melodies
Sep 14th 2006
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robynwildchild
Member since May 06th 2003
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Thu Sep-14-06 02:57 AM

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1. "RE: heartbroken soft spoken tear soaken melodies"
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"when thoughts run rampid, there will always be a blank page."
- robyn john,1995

bless u. i saw myself in your head for a moment.

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
https://www.facebook.com/robyn.wildchild12
psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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dior
Member since Sep 02nd 2006
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Mon Sep-18-06 07:23 PM

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right on. i've felt this way..this last week.

  

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Mahogany5952
Member since Aug 19th 2003
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Fri Sep-15-06 05:06 PM

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I feel you. Reminds me of my recent moods and the stuff I wrote b/c of it. Moods is the wrong word. That somehow makes it sound petty and within one's control. This was intense and so honest. It takes courage to put yourself out there like that. And I appreciate that you shared this piece. Thanks.

M5952

"There are two ways of meeting difficulties. You alter the difficulties or you alter yourself to meet them." ~Phyllis Bottome

  

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Amai_1
Member since May 27th 2002
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Fri Sep-15-06 06:19 PM

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I wish to God I couldn't,
But I feel you deeply.

Beautiful piece.

  

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robynwildchild
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Tue Sep-19-06 01:56 AM

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its been so long and i know that
your a face lost in the crowd.

far away
distant
beyond what i can hold
or want
but i still feel u.

insane.

~~~~~~~~ luv R.
https://www.facebook.com/robyn.wildchild12
psycho.
"Institutions encourage us to consider the opinions they sell as "facts" and that we "believe" rather than question the morality they pitch."
cities need fewer shopping malls and more skat

  

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WILDOUT
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Wed Sep-20-06 07:16 PM

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i wish you all peace in your hearts..
remember

honesty is key
beauty is not always pretty
ugliness can be the best news you ever recieve
storms can bring together people who are far apart
and no matter what we go through we have our love
our hearts

i wont be on much anymore due to the fact that i am leaving the internet behind for a realer more meditative lifestyle.

every few months ill drop what ive come up with on the other side.

to those whom ive shared time with here, i wish you all well, to those who have shared my time here, i wish you well as well, and to those who are to come to this place, remember amidst all your battling and rapping...

this place is a sacred haven of the world's poetic heart.

one
((wo))

  

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