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empro
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Fri Sep-08-06 07:02 AM

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"I Lied"
Fri Sep-08-06 07:04 AM by empro

  

          

So I lied and cheated
What was once a bright future is now completed
Now all alone feeling defeated
Physically depleted
Is there anything I can say?
Anything I can do to make you stay?
The truth is I'm scared when your away
In your presence is the only time I'm truly okay
This earth is one big play
We're the characters
But how can I be both the lover & villain?
Smooth criminal or deceitful chameleon
I need us "two" to become one
A lot has been said, but little has been done
Now is the call for action
I can tell your worn out and losing traction
Hopefully I can meet your satisfaction once again
Trust runs thin
How do you stay so clean in this world of sin...
You'll never see this poem
But please forgive me and my pen

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
"please forgive me and my pen"
Sep 08th 2006
1
Very Nice
Sep 08th 2006
2
RE: Very Nice
Sep 13th 2006
4
RE: I Lied
Sep 13th 2006
3

ASIEM
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Fri Sep-08-06 02:07 PM

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1. ""please forgive me and my pen""
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now that is quotable
nice ink spread cross tablets

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ALIENmind
Member since Sep 07th 2006
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Fri Sep-08-06 02:39 PM

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peace-peace just wanted to pay my respects to your latest work and to thank you for reaching out to my 1st post up here...i plan on getting real comfortable hehehehehe...

  

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empro
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Wed Sep-13-06 11:44 PM

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4. "RE: Very Nice"
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Thank you.

This was personal to me, but needed to be written down. Welcome to the boards Alien and keep droppin those flames man


peace

  

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maddhghts422
Member since Jul 14th 2006
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Wed Sep-13-06 11:33 PM

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3. "RE: I Lied"
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Good Work. I especially liked the ending.

The trick is to love somebody.... if you love one person , you see everybody else differently
James Baldwin

Harmonies sashays over melodies effortlessly riding rhythms methodically, while the cadence of the drum beats like an orgasmic heartbeat

  

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