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deepthought74
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Wed Sep-06-06 04:26 PM

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"SOUL OF A WHISPER"


  

          

“SOUL OF A WHISPER”

Writing her story with purpose
Without no delay
Consequences of you, moon brown lengths
Cocoa streams
Right hand
Relentless factor
Light my fire
Playing superstar ballad
Beyond peaks
Ocean romantic guarantee
Speaks golden lady movement
Imagine yesterday
Black thought intimate instrumental
Speechless glares
Angelic
Atlantis out beyond the sea
Travels inside mission lifetime

Furious
Unconscious facial
Chocolate lips symphony
Rip pages play verses
B-side progression at night
Birth of cool
Miles vinyl
Slow dancing
Fly lady held prisoner
Memory lane poetry
Apart of me, letters up in attic’s excursion
Reading out loud
Endless lines
Well prepared subject matter
Thinking of this
Storyline’s darling
Catching matinee’s picture
Raw beauty expert
Haven’t experience butter soft volumes of caress skin yet
Nude body
Love supreme
Modern marvel wetness
Rose petal romance
Inhaling apple tree soloist
Lonely waterfalls
Tempting commitments
Dirty words
Fresh again, freaky tongue flow
Come clean across explicit screams
Like I said before
Queen of heart classic samples
Exhale skin’s boom bap masterpiece
Cursive deep bone
Evening stimulation

Got daytime pleas awaiting mind pleasing
Sexy sight priority
Pen hip hop latest
Burning candle
Poetic flight
Fiend footsteps
Autumn wind
Special place, the sweetest someone
Tomorrow, physical attraction, met infinity relax one
Wise moments
Word of mouth
Alphabet bass lines
Soon as I get home
Talk of the town
Railroad’s genius
Mad pressure, ink sinking into page’s flashback
This poem was long overdue
Boasts of your features
Vivid season obsession
Blushing down spine’s
Honey dip renaissance
Sexy legs habit
No question, penmanship margin
Brings joy, mocha exclusive
Handcuffs heartbeat pounding
Embrace yours
Moonlight
Pure air icon, mention your name
Sentence next
Work of art
Lovesick depth
Soul cry slow jam
Sweetwater
Intelligent intellectual
Dig into chosen rhyme
Life or death vows
Magnetic
Teacher, classroom
Younger crush
Ageless preference
Closer to the sun, compelling story
Telling down to knees
Nasty mind
Sip sultry
Impeccable definition
Energetic
Photogenic
Hair pulling
Delta, southern soliloquy
Always in my head
Out of breath
TKO, romantic quotes
Want hold back secrets
For the record
Showing intentions when hello listen
To piano’s inspiration
Living legend
Black star revelation!

Deepthought

"When I hear wack rhymes, I get fed up"- Krs-One

"Even when I'm bragging, I'm being sincere"-LL

Verse One:

Could you tell me who released our animal instinct?
Got the white man sittin' there tickled pink.
Laughin' at us on the av

  

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RE: SOUL OF A WHISPER
Sep 07th 2006
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RE: SOUL OF A WHISPER
Sep 15th 2006
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RE: SOUL OF A WHISPER
Sep 07th 2006
2
Still HEAR It ...
Nov 29th 2006
4

ms mimi diva
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Thu Sep-07-06 02:54 AM

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1. "RE: SOUL OF A WHISPER"
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Soul of a whisper or chronicle of music, perhaps? Thanks for posting this.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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Mahogany5952
Member since Aug 19th 2003
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Fri Sep-15-06 03:59 PM

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It was the title of this one that sucked me in, and I was NOT disappointed. Loved this. When I think of whispers I think of things that are sacred, intimate, sometimes even forbidden. And this touched on all of those. Wow.

~Kyla aka Mahogany5952

"There are two ways of meeting difficulties. You alter the difficulties or you alter yourself to meet them." ~Phyllis Bottome

  

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the_best_part
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Thu Sep-07-06 08:00 AM

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ive always liked ur style of writing. i like this.

@asiaradiant

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Nov-29-06 11:56 PM

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4. "Still HEAR It ..."
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~Whispering~

^UP^ in my ear --


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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