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ms mimi diva
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Thu Aug-31-06 03:28 AM

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" Beautiful Life"


  

          


i.
I heard a rumor that she
was invincible--
a
stunning beauty
aching for
tragedy

ii.
The lingering lover
shadow hip hugger
improvisational conversationalist
she never sleeps with those
whom she's already bedded

iii.
Old love
New love
Often borrowed
And sometime blue
An evolvement of the sum total of
space, time and opportunity

iv.
A convergence of two souls
A union of remittance
And no matter how cold she leaves you
Get this
She gives
The longest
Hottest
Wettest
Kiss goodbye

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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RE: Beautiful Life
Aug 31st 2006
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RE: Beautiful Life
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      RE: Beautiful Life
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           RE: Beautiful Life
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i, ii, and iv
Sep 01st 2006
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invisible ink
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Thu Aug-31-06 10:44 AM

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1. "RE: Beautiful Life"
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iii.
Old love
New love
Often borrowed
And sometime blue
An evolvement of the sum total of
space, time and opportunity

this is about where i am right now...k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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Shakeet Lokh Em
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Thu Aug-31-06 11:28 AM

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2. "RE: Beautiful Life"
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iv.
A convergence of two souls
A union of remittance
And no matter how cold she leaves you
Get this
She gives
The longest
Hottest
Wettest
Kiss goodbye

OWWWWWWW!!! lol You're one of my favorites. ~one~

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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ms mimi diva
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Thu Aug-31-06 03:56 PM

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3. "RE: Beautiful Life"
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Thank you! Means a lot coming from someone as gifted as you.

I hope people were able to get that the woman is life, personified Otherwise, my reputation my start to get besmirched!

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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ASIEM
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Fri Sep-01-06 12:40 AM

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4. "RE: Beautiful Life"
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i know you crack yourself up most of the time ?
life ahhemm thought it was you ok "besmirched", not. thanks for the clarity
amazing writing

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ms mimi diva
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6. "RE: Beautiful Life"
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LOL, sometimes you just have to laugh at life!

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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mindful
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Fri Sep-01-06 10:12 AM

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5. "i, ii, and iv"
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stellar reads... absolutely stellar...

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Pinwheels and HulaHoops|the book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.blogspot.com|the life

l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.
he has me tucked and folded ©the best part

  

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