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ASIEM
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"promises"
Wed Aug-23-06 06:01 AM by ASIEM

  

          

plaid words dressed in
opal paralyized emotions
make wages from memories

sound bites hold still
the moment at the alter


mouth parted tongue reaches
an end as there are no means
just playthings makin noise

write it down
and make plain
what you intend to keep

less the air carry away your hope, spoken then gone...


"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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it picked up for me here
Aug 23rd 2006
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RE: promises
Aug 23rd 2006
2
RE: promises
Aug 24th 2006
3
RE: promises
Aug 24th 2006
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RE: promises
Oct 01st 2006
5
Hip Hop Yo Ass ...
Nov 29th 2006
6
RE: promises
Dec 05th 2006
7
RE: promises
Dec 05th 2006
8
thanks for...
Dec 15th 2006
9
RE: promises
Dec 19th 2011
10
RE: promises
Dec 28th 2011
11

mindful
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Wed Aug-23-06 05:50 PM

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1. "it picked up for me here"
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mouth parted tongue reaches
an end as there are no means
just playthings makin noise

and maintained following the above lines.

write it down
and make plain
what you intend to keep

less the air carry away your hope, spoken then gone...


nice ending. Peace~
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Pinwheels and HulaHoops|the book
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318
http://msmind.blogspot.com|the life

l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.
i'm aching for your awe ©ms mimi diva

  

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muted
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Wed Aug-23-06 11:36 PM

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2. "RE: promises"
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that shit will make ya boy shutter... good lord

muted.muxtape.com
(what i like)

  

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ms mimi diva
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Thu Aug-24-06 01:39 PM

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3. "RE: promises"
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mouth parted tongue reaches
an end as there are no means
just playthings makin noise

write it down
and make plain
what you intend to keep


This is it. I like the way that the flow here, "parts" and returns to making it plain, going back to the mouth analogy.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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triganome
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Thu Aug-24-06 07:38 PM

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4. "RE: promises"
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hey asiem,

i like you outta your usual form.
agree with ms mimi. nice

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Half of what I say is meaningless; but I say it so that the other half may reach you. Kahlil Gibran


http://triganome.wordpress.com/

  

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ASIEM
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5. "RE: promises"
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thanks yall for peepin

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Nov-29-06 11:32 PM

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6. "Hip Hop Yo Ass ..."
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Back ^UP^ to Page 1 --


I like your verbage here, Mister! --- *Yessssirrr*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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invisible ink
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Tue Dec-05-06 04:48 PM

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7. "RE: promises"
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write it down
and make plain
what you intend to keep

less the air carry away your hope, spoken then gone...


ummph...hot sh*t....miss k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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ms mimi diva
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8. "RE: promises"
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mouth parted tongue reaches
an end as there are no means
just playthings makin noise

write it down
and make plain
what you intend to keep
*******

nice drop. I came, and enjoyed.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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ASIEM
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feelin this i;m feelin it back right bout now hhmph

"promises" i make them made them
lost them found them then again?

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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ASIEM
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10. "RE: promises"
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one stayed all night
till dawn parted
the sky cracked
a little light
spread cross her face
then she spoke
"good morning"
that's when i remembered
i didn't know her name
i said i wouldn't do this
i made myself a......
aw damn
when does tomorrow come
yesterday i made my self a promise
today broken i laid beside her
acting as if it was all ok
that's when i returned
"yes it is a good morning, sleep well?"

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Dec-28-11 11:28 PM

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11. "RE: promises"
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5 Years ... from start to finish, huh? -- *smiles*

Your words are timeless ... your concepts and storylines are relate~able ... and your work ... I've definitely missed!


Good 2 C U still painting "word pictures" on OKP!

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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