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Monk
Member since Jul 31st 2006
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Thu Aug-17-06 01:57 PM

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"love of a friend"


          

Unaquianted feelings of Lust
her entire being the root of my expanse
yet i get fiery force every utterance
still all emotions maintain robust
& pain i feel is surely unjust
the sound of my soul sparks a resonance
and pounds at my heart with choirs of chants
myself i cant trust when passion is thrust
the wanting is felt and held deep inside
nevertheless the stress still my head trip
struggle battle and fight with each stride
I burn more love & singe each quip
adoring anguish cotterized by sulphide
locked in this spot of forever friendship

  

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RE: love of a friend
Aug 21st 2006
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Monk
Member since Jul 31st 2006
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Mon Aug-21-06 12:53 PM

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1. "RE: love of a friend"
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constructive crit???

  

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