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AidenWaves
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Thu Aug-17-06 12:44 AM

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"and so the brooke flows"


  

          

she bends like hips do
rounding pastures of green
violet, rose
and lemon hue
and though she's blue
her song's never sad
it's filled with life
like one i've never had
soft and cool
like an old blues song
and still vast and wide
like a lover's arms
deep like blackhole abyss
andromidy
that's how my love flows
so, why am i the only one who sees?


Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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RE: and so the brooke flows
Aug 18th 2006
1
RE: and so the brooke flows
Aug 20th 2006
2
i love these lines
Aug 22nd 2006
3
RE: i love these lines
Nov 14th 2006
4

ASIEM
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Fri Aug-18-06 08:46 AM

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1. "RE: and so the brooke flows"
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liked the colors and image blue was used twice kinda took away the flow for me
but i still likes

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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AidenWaves
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Sun Aug-20-06 10:34 AM

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2. "RE: and so the brooke flows"
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glad u felt it. i don't know know why blue is an issue. but i guess that's how it is right now.


Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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mindful
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Tue Aug-22-06 06:30 PM

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3. "i love these lines"
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and though she's blue
her song's never sad
it's filled with life
like one i've never had

and although this word sounds nice, "andromidy" i'm unable to acquire a meaning for it. is it misspelled?

good to see you back... *nods*

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AidenWaves
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Tue Nov-14-06 04:56 PM

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4. "RE: i love these lines"
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probably, u know how u get after work... thanks.

Aiden Waves, the cleansing fire

"just as the pureness of honey can sanctify my sins, i say let ur love blow in the wind...." -me!

  

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