I lean into the sloping curve
of a naveled nexus
and lick
bitter
sweet
fruit
salty, like lime on the lips
of a glass
where the drink has taken
inroads
to the human valley
somewhere between heaven and earth

it is
the in between
that gets me every time

the sin and the reconciliation
the love and loss
the faith and fear

"All the evil and all the love" as Shug Avery says

that keeps me
thirsting
for something more

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

I lean into the sloping curve
of a naveled nexus
and lick
bitter
sweet
fruit
salty, like lime on the lips
of a glass
where the drink has taken
inroads
to the human valley
somewhere between heaven and earth

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need i say more...u nailed it right frm the beginning. the ending was cool...but the beginning cut to the chase...nicely done...miss k
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if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

your pen reached depths devine and found another human frailty worthy of consciousness
now onto higher ground hmmm...in lower form yeh i like where i went with this piece

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

*blushes* LOL-- You know it may sound crazy but I didn't know I went there until just now, Asiem! Must be some pent up sexual tension!

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

<--get grown,bus!--


me and the fellas would converge and heat up some Hot Pockets in preparation for Rap City.© Roc

let's talk:
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my uncles:
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hey we gotta stop droppin pearls lookin for swine to pick them up up cause this really does reach depths devine...

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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I liked this piece peace.

we were born as sinners & this spoke of our daily temptations

Really I could say alot but you said it fair not as in it was fair but it was fair play not fowl and the piece was well on.