So here is the deal: I am currently writing what will become my first album. I have already decided that the following song will be the first track. The flow might be kind of hard to read at parts, but I have rehearsed it and rehearsed it so trust me, it's right.
The song has a dark subject matter, but is told in a relatively lighthearted way. Originally it was titled "Slow Suicide" but that is waaaaaaaaaaay too dark and thus sounds pretentious, which is the exact opposite of what I want. So please, make a criticism, make up a title, do whatever, I am just interested to hear what people have to say.






I smoke a pack a day, thats the way I get by
Then drink some vodka that I bought for 10.95
It may be cheap, but hey it keeps that feelin' alive,
So day by day I find new ways of slow...
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide

I hear the chik-chik boom each time I clik-clik light
And shake, shake sumora that night fright outta sight
Ok, I'm all right
Well yeah right, foolin' who
Mystery, miss target
Aim wrong but claim true
Struck out but Im lucky with Camel Gold or Parliament
Refill Agave cause right now I'm hardly bent
Laaaaast call for alcohol
Nope! Bar is in the kitchen and its down the hall
I look into the glass and the bartender says
"Son you better hold off cause you lookin like death"
Bitch! Mind your own goddamn beeswax!
This aint a night cap, just another sweet snack!
My roommate asks "Are you talking to yourself?"
rissemfrassem i dont feel so well
"Lets get you some water - - - "
No, you go to hell!
Thats what Ive been doing and so far its going well,
with a

Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide

After the cigarette break ends, time for cigarette lunch,
Then a cigarette snack hits like a cigarette punch
Cigarettes for dinner, then pot for dessert
1, 2, 8, tokes, it aint gonna hurt
Mmm, thats the good shit, pack it some more Chris,
Wasn't I standing? Tell me, whose floor is this?
Is that an 808, or is it my heart?
Lay me down gently and I'll sink into dark,
Cause I love the night, but fuck the night, I will not go quietly,
Said I love the night, but fuck the night, I will not go quietly,
Know what, I love the night, but fuck the night, I will not go quietly!
Man, I LOVE THE NIGHT, BUT FUCK THE NIGHT, I WILL NOT GO QUIETLY!
I'm sick of all this death talk and my suicide ways!
I'm sick of being shocked that I made it another day!
I'm sick of being sick, now I'm ready to live it up!
Aw fuck it pass the pipe Chris, Im gonna give it up,
with a

Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebye
Suicide, its a suicide, budabyebyebye
Suicide, its a suicide
selfdestruction,youreheadedforselfdestruction
selfdestruction,youreheadedforselfdestruction
selfdestruction,youreheadedforselfdestruction
selfdestruction,youreheadedforselfdestruction








Hmm, well on paper I think it comes off really dark, but just trust that the delivery is all over the place with inflection and stuff like that so you dont get the full feel of it here, but oh well, do what you will with it.

- Dub

I give rappers the biz for being m-izza-a-archaic.

I am trying to think of something better but I'll come back to you

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*Note to self: Add Sig*

No? No good?

- Dub

I give rappers the biz for being m-izza-a-archaic.