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newolf
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Sat Aug-05-06 06:25 PM

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"Virginia Summer"


          

the shadows are long,
virginia summers --
stars melding with humid air,
our dark shapes stretch for days.

i contemplate my elongated form,
reflected on sun baked brick --
i am transformed,
virginia summers,
i am new.

the days go longer,
my shadow grows and stretches,
twists and twines with passing dusken figures --
i have dissolved into you,
virginia summers,
your old dominion.

i walk through your gardens,
my shadows preceeding me --
into your susnet.
into your dusk.

i am one of your world of shadows,
virginia summers,
but not merely a shadow of myself.

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Subject Author Message Date ID
i liked these lines the most
Aug 07th 2006
1
dopeness
Aug 09th 2006
2
classical tone
Aug 09th 2006
3
RE: Virginia Summer
Aug 09th 2006
4
RE: Virginia Summer
Aug 10th 2006
5
RE: Virginia Summer
Aug 11th 2006
6
RE: Virginia Summer
Aug 13th 2006
7
I Wonder: Where Is Ms. Wolfie?
May 05th 2009
8

mindful
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1. "i liked these lines the most"
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stars melding with humid air,
our dark shapes stretch for days.

i contemplate my elongated form,
reflected on sun baked brick --
i am transformed,
virginia summers,
i am new.

up for the imagery alone... Peace~

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can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

  

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UncleClimax
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2. "dopeness"
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really evokes a sense of time and place with great sparseness.
dug.

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ThaAnthology
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nicely shaped, I enjoyed the imagery.

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maddhghts422
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4. "RE: Virginia Summer"
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Nice piece. Since moving to Seattle this made me miss home.

  

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WABBIT
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nice piece, and nicely written keep up the good work


peace wabbit


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i have to hold on just to survive with friendz-tupac

  

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crow
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Fri Aug-11-06 01:47 AM

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6. "RE: Virginia Summer"
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I got a real solid image in this poem and that I'm sure is what you were looking for, so you did an excellent job with it

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invisible ink
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7. "RE: Virginia Summer"
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i walk through your gardens,
my shadows preceeding me --
into your susnet.
into your dusk.


well positioned words...nice work...miss k


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8. "I Wonder: Where Is Ms. Wolfie?"
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... with her Virginia Summers --



^This^ felt like a warm summer ~breeze~ .... *ReFreshing*



*Miss U*


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I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

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