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SoulfulAquariusGriot
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Wed Aug-02-06 12:01 PM

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"She Likes Poetry"


  

          

I could sense it
in her dream-filled eyes
as I devised
the next rhythm
of each line
It was a feeling Divine.

In her mocha-colored pupils
I could see stanzas by Sanchez
I could feel the force and fire
of an Amiri Baraka syllable, SO lyrical.

She likes poetry

The kind of poetry
you can taste on your tongue.

The kind of poetry
that leaves you numb
after reading just a line or two.
Blue Jazz poetry.

Poetry that roars LOUD.

Poetry that makes Poets proud.

She likes poetry
Is what she told me
over tea and talk.

Told me she loved the way
my poems stalked her in her dreams
Loved that my poems made her seem
as is if she were vacationing in Vienna
sipping on lime dakaris
under the loveliest of trees
feeling the softness of a breeze.

She likes poetry

Rumi
Poe
and Elliot.

Maya, Neruda, Madubhuti, and E. Ethelbert Miller.

She called me Mr. Word Smith
as she told me about this
undying love.

She told me
she even liked poetry
just because.

She likes poetry

(c) Christopher Donshale Sims
2006

Respect yourself, know yourself, but most importantly, love yourself

  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
welcome
Aug 02nd 2006
1
RE: She Likes Poetry
Aug 04th 2006
2
thanks for sharing
Aug 04th 2006
3
These lines:
Aug 04th 2006
4
Lovely
Aug 05th 2006
5
RE: She Likes Poetry
Feb 06th 2007
6

rgv
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Wed Aug-02-06 02:44 PM

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1. "welcome"
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i just want chu to know
how i feel
how i feel

  

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SoulfulAquariusGriot
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Fri Aug-04-06 12:04 PM

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2. "RE: She Likes Poetry"
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Thank you.

Preciate it.

One love,
SoulUniversal a.k.a. SoulAquarius
http://www.myspace.com/universouloveuniversoul

Respect yourself, know yourself, but most importantly, love yourself

  

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roobug
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Fri Aug-04-06 12:49 PM

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3. "thanks for sharing"
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Hope you decide to stick around, I enjoyed that. You see, I too, like poetry.

ONE

  

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rubbersoulonice
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Fri Aug-04-06 05:59 PM

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4. "These lines:"
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>The kind of poetry
>that leaves you numb
>after reading just a line or two.

The whole poem for me is right here.
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Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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crow
Member since Feb 23rd 2005
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Sat Aug-05-06 11:53 PM

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5. "Lovely"
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The different way you describes a poem leaves me smiling

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*Note to self: Add Sig*

  

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ASIEM
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Tue Feb-06-07 09:56 AM

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6. "RE: She Likes Poetry"
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i missed this and the chance to say welcome so here it is at an appropriate time Right NOW!
Welcome and Great writing is there more? i'll look NOW

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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