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Rajeniro757
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"99 OUTS (but this aint done)"
Sat Jul-29-06 09:37 PM by Rajeniro757

  

          

stay breaking lines like Ninety Nine of the Raiders
Never out of line, just stay outing fakers
can't stay out the streets, but I'll stay out the papers
an outsider to outtakers ,I'm straight out the gate
outstanding on the break like tony atlas with the weight
thats 8 outs, for those whos late your moms I ate out
but don't shout, or fix your mouth to pout
youtube knew what i'm about, thats between Y and U
if you don't have a clue, O thats the callout
fresher then trout in route to down south
OutKast in the dash as i mash the gas out
No Doubt Don't Speak , just pass the fuck out
outwit outfits with outlandish styles i brandish
making a fan wish for a extra hand in spanish
mano man it's out of hand like dice and gods plan
when i let there be light and outshine til suntans
outright the writers are called out like bad liars
their sire set flows on fire like ghostriders tires
I never tire out, just inspire the outcryers
to stab tracks out backs like mike meyers

I gotta do some editing so lets call this a rough draft

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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RE: 99 OUTS (but this aint done)
Apr 25th 2007
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i didn't post the final
Apr 25th 2007
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PhotoSynthesis
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Wed Apr-25-07 12:08 AM

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1. "RE: 99 OUTS (but this aint done)"
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>I gotta do some editing so lets call this a rough draft

I didn't see a final copy anywhere -- (But I could've missed it) --

In any case, the wordplay in this joint was jumpin' "trampoline steelo"! --



*Bounce ^UP^*



A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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Rajeniro757
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Wed Apr-25-07 04:22 PM

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2. "i didn't post the final"
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i reworked it and it was pretty long and tried to chop it down some. In the end i just hated messing with it and decided to leave it alone.
I got it on file on a disk somewhere.
Thanks for reading it though, Photo ,much love

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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