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tonywashington
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"various short poems"
Sat Jul-29-06 06:02 PM by tonywashington

          

these are all from my book Refrigerator Poetry. enjoy.

fields
-------
hunting for life's ink
i look through sights
into fields of pages
wide open like Montana pastures
testing my patients
as nothing comes into view


haiku
-------
blue lights jumped off chrome
putting the block on alert
as corner boys fled


haiku
-------
God sprays light from blue
sky's framing harbor mornings
that drift on muslin


africa
-------
At a distance
Family sits
Recovering from
Instability
Caused by outside
Aggression



the 50's
---------
hot & humid
mississippi roads
an incubator
for hatching assassins
pecking away
at all darkness
that wondered its way


espanol haiku
-------------
eres tan linda
como gotas de lluvia
acostado en hojas de rosas


haiku x2 (her words)
-------------------
i need my hair pulled
i need my ass smacked u know
talk shit to me man

u know what i like
grab that voluptuous ass
take control of me


solo
-----
i keep trying
to play this duet
with u

but every time
i try
u go right into
a solo

coming in
on the one
instead of the two
rest


change #2
---------
while living in sin
i tell self
like Sam Cooke
"change gonna come"

knowing that
i will turn
tomorrow
into next week
and next week
into next month


rebirth
--------
blues slide chromatic
down harps living in E
rebirthing juke joints
during after hour jams


google
-------
charles hamilton houston
howard university alumni
civil rights trail blazer
supreme court agitator

-T
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"rick ross got old african woman swag" (c)nayaa

  

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RE: various short poems
Jul 30th 2006
1
the 50's
Jul 31st 2006
2
thank you.
Jul 31st 2006
3
RE: various short poems
Aug 03rd 2006
4
thanks for the feedback.
Aug 03rd 2006
5
RE: various short poems
Aug 04th 2006
6
solo and google
Aug 06th 2006
7
it's funny...
Aug 06th 2006
8
RE: various short poems
Jan 02nd 2007
9

invisible ink
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1. "RE: various short poems"
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solo
-----
i keep trying
to play this duet
with u

but every time
i try
u go right into
a solo

coming in
on the one
instead of the two
rest


this one is always my favorite...k

if you didn't define yourself for yourself you'd be crunched into other peoples fantasies of you an eaten alive.

audre lorde

  

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rubbersoulonice
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2. "the 50's"
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pure hotness.

the 50's
---------
hot & humid
mississippi roads
an incubator
for hatching assassins
pecking away
at all darkness
that wondered its way
------------------------------
Something like Eldridge
Cleaver meets John Lennon

  

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tonywashington
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-T
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"rick ross got old african woman swag" (c)nayaa

  

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Amira Muse
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4. "RE: various short poems"
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I've always admired what it takes to write short poems. there isn't a word wasted and it feels like you've read so much once you reach the end. I especially loved the following two:

solo
-----
i keep trying
to play this duet
with u

but every time
i try
u go right into
a solo

coming in
on the one
instead of the two
rest


change #2
---------
while living in sin
i tell self
like Sam Cooke
"change gonna come"

knowing that
i will turn
tomorrow
into next week
and next week
into next month

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"I'on wanna hear no yang yang from yo' transistor"-The Honorable James Evans

Reforming Charter Member since 2005

www.myspace.com/amiramuse
www.amiarmuse.wordpress.com

  

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tonywashington
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5. "thanks for the feedback."
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-T
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"rick ross got old african woman swag" (c)nayaa

  

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ms mimi diva
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africa
-------
At a distance
Family sits
Recovering from
Instability
Caused by outside
Aggression

I like this. I always love crisp, clean language.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

  

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mindful
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and the following:

africa
-------
At a distance
Family sits
Recovering from
Instability
Caused by outside
Aggression



the 50's
---------
hot & humid
mississippi roads
an incubator
for hatching assassins
pecking away
at all darkness
that wondered its way

*nods*

thanks for sharing... Peace~

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l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.

i think i feel my skin going scaled.
can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

  

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tonywashington
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"solo" seems to get a lot of love. it's starting to become one of my personal favorites. from what i remember it all most didn't make the book. go figure.

-T
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"rick ross got old african woman swag" (c)nayaa

  

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ASIEM
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9. "RE: various short poems"
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excellent writing goin on here

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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