i woke up with
last night
laying flat
in my belly
agitated when
i sat up
attempting to stretch
it out of me
released instead
violently
choking me
until it burned my throat
bending me over
weakening my knees
gushing past my teeth
splashing to my feet
strangly akin to
the difficulty
i swallowed
to trust, finally
and the sickness
i feel
now
from betrayal
with eyes watery
and red
i look at my
reflection
saying
never again
but knowing
that my heart wont allow
the bitter taste of this moment
to linger into
deeply rooted traits of
my character
now
i feel
removed
jolted and
picked apart
but like any
thriving part
of nature
i'll keep living
to become
whole
again

@asiaradiant

especially this part:
saying
never again
but knowing
that my heart wont allow
the bitter taste of this moment
to linger into
deeply rooted traits of
my character
now


i'll keep living
to become
whole
again - like alcohol decreases our wholeness and leaves us less of a person. Funny how sometimes I don't feel "whole" until I've had something to drink (not that I overdo it, I just love a beer when I get home from work).

ONE

okay i jack i gotta know exactly what you meant here cause i went a couple places and that's cool art is what art does but i gotta know what you was tawkin bout feel me? loved the imagery

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

I loved this; it describes my twenty something identity issues perfectly.

http://worthwatering.blogspot.com
Can it be I stayed away too long?/
Did I leave your mind when I was gone?/
It's not my thing trying to get back/
But this time let me tell you where I'm at-- Jackson Five

the most important words of the poem are above....

the ones that grabbed my attention are as follows:

strangly akin to
the difficulty
i swallowed
to trust, finally
and the sickness
i feel
now
from betrayal
with eyes watery
and red
i look at my
reflection
saying
never again
but knowing
that my heart wont allow
the bitter taste of this moment
to linger into
deeply rooted traits of
my character

i love... what you have to say... Peace~

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l'amour est la médecine fidèle d'un dieu.

i think i feel my skin going scaled.
can i come up for air? ©amel larrieux

*Yes Indeed*


Morning Sickness -- (Throwing ^UP^ Emotional Creativity)


~Felt~

A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

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la beaute' est dans un uterus de la mere

no half-steppin in '07.

This is a great poem...I love the symmetry between the physical and emotional pain. I can't quote because I really loved the whole thing and how it flowed. Would be a great piece to use for spoken word.

peice i wrote.... After he hurt me i took the morning after pill to kill the pain he'd possibly birthed in me

we could write a peice in between about realizing pain had infact produced pregnancy of emotions and how that feels to grow inside...

And sinigh with this. Just a thought

Very powerful . Keep shining!

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WITH CUZ (STACEY) GONE, I'LL NEVER REALLY BE HERE AGAIN

I swear I'm a marry an OKP


Nakia Genevieve are my middle names... Not my attempt to morph Phenom with Novembersgift... But...