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empro
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Thu Jul-27-06 01:40 AM

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"Uninspiried / Last Days"
Thu Jul-27-06 01:48 AM by empro

  

          

Sky's gray
Life in dismay
Feet hurting
Soul is tired
Feeling so uninspired
Sweating in my dreams
Searching for forever
But can never find peace


I met the creator
Inside a crater
Riding in a chariot headed towards the center of the equator
And I asked:

"What's greater?"

Living for hope of future eternal bliss and happiness
Or simply think back of old times and reminisce...







  

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Subject Author Message Date ID
Push on, push on.
Jul 27th 2006
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FELT
Jul 27th 2006
2
RE: Uninspiried / Last Days
Feb 05th 2007
3
^UP^ 4 Inspiration ...
Feb 06th 2007
4

roobug
Member since May 22nd 2006
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Thu Jul-27-06 04:42 PM

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1. "Push on, push on."
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I think like that sometimes - that it is easier to remember the good times then try and think about what times may lie ahead. The uncertainty, the unknown. I've always said my greatest fear and my greatest hope are one in the same - they both are the possibility of tomorrow.

ONE

  

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Rajeniro757
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Thu Jul-27-06 05:40 PM

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2. "FELT"
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Living for hope of future eternal bliss and happiness

i mean those memories are great but the ability to create new ones for those that are here feels greater to me.

R.I.P. Martin alexander (Marty Gra) Alston - my brother, my mentor , my friend-

  

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ASIEM
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Mon Feb-05-07 08:09 AM

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3. "RE: Uninspiried / Last Days"
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up for revision..."uninspired" i think not
your content far out weighs form

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder

  

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PhotoSynthesis
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Tue Feb-06-07 01:51 AM

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4. "^UP^ 4 Inspiration ..."
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U know -- U got 5 joints on the first page -- I'mmma have to report you to the board police! --


*Nice Joint -- I'd Smoke It*


A guitar string vibrating, a measure of my soul, a breech in the silence --
I've always felt like words come through me & I write them down... they have no master --- gsquared ♥

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/photosynthesis_music.htm

  

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